Reviews for Having Edge
forgetmenotlovely chapter 1 . 2/12
It's been a while since my first read. The second time was just as good, if not better, because I had a better idea of what to look for. You truly are an amazing story teller. The language is beautiful; some lines make me Sasuhina moments have always had weight, and have spanned the entire emotional spectrum. Their first kiss was passionate and full of adrenaline, and was especially satisfying for the reader. Their agreement to fight for each other was simply beautiful.

The supporting characters add so much flavor. I love Ino and her complexity. Sakura's character development really surprised me as well. A good comparison was made between her and Orochimaro. Her character was also telling when she expressed her views on the layered nature of loyalty. Sai is, well, Sai. I'm not liking Naruto's character as much, because it feels the same from chapter to chapter. His banters with Sasuke are funny, but I think they could also be used more sparingly. I'm going to save my review on Itachi for another chapter. He' and frustrating, to say the least. You could say this is my way of making up for reviews that I should have done a long time ago; this story really deserves all the adoration.
makarina chapter 1 . 1/22
I love ~it ,I wish there was more to it , even if it was another one shot (sequel)
AnayHyuugaSakamaki chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
DUH BOMB chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Nice one shot
Fadingrace chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
Just great! Loved it.
crystalblue19 chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Aw, that was so cute~
xxcandylover23xx chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
This was cute, wish there was more.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
awesome :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2015
loved it! good job 3
KikAssAwesomeness chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
Did he do that just to mess with her?
gummy b3ars chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
kellyshl chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
PuppetPrince chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
I don't like it I L.O.V.E IT sooooo much thanx for the lovely story
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
Love the character development and ever changing relationship between the two. It was really sweet. And your descriptions are lovely, you really understand the characters more. It's great to see slight changes from how you perceive a character based on events around them and ever changing relationships, opening up a whole new alley of different emotions you didn't know they had. Truly splendid work. Thank you. I wish you'd have continued this!
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