|Reviews for Having Edge|
| andtheniwaslike chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
that was really cute!
| Alis Volat Propris chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Love the line "But Sasuke's lips were warm, contrary to her suspicions." This story is adorable.
| bridmatt chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Cuuuute! I like how your SasuHina always acknowledges the problems that would occur in a relationship between two quiet, passive people and seeks to overcome those problems. (Still - to show my bias - I think the problems between two people alike in temperament wouldn't be nearly as bad as the problems between two wildly different people like Hinata Naruto.) It was nice how Hinata got the ball rolling by helping Sasuke with his wounds and kissing him for the first time, then Sasuke returned the favor by helping her with her wounds and giving her the big kiss at the end. (He saved it for the perfect moment.) Nice job on this. :)
| KellyYeoh chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
The ending was unexpected but it made the whole story cute HAHA
| Haruka2007 chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
great one shot
| HANYAxtaiga chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
this is sooo cute! I haven't been reading fics from this pairing for a long time. :)
| 921350 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
cake story! :D
| princess-oro chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I like it. It's in your usual style; brief, succinct and still having a lot of depth. I suppose this story is befitting of two characters who are quiet and generally passive. Thanks for a good read :)
| FallenRaindrops chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I once again love you. That was so freakingawesome. Not just freaking or awesome, but freakingawesome.
I loved the reaction of Sasuke's family.
I also loved the section with Sasuke's thoughts on Hinata's kissing game. XD
I wish there had been a scene with Hinata's family cuz the Hyuugas are a funny lot to mess with.
But other than that, fantastic fic as usual!
| I.Eat.Bishie's chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
This is probably the most realistic Hinata-Sasuke arranged marriage story that I have ever read. I like it to no end, the descriptions aren't over the top and you kept the dialogue simple and very in character.
This is definitely the best arranged marriage fic I have ever read, straight to the highly deserved spot on my favorites list.
| Shadow of Miracles chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
There must be more SasuHina fics like this. I really enjoyed myself reading through this story, my only disappointment is that it ended lol I guess I'm just a needy person cuz I can't get enough of your stories and I want more. I hope you'll make more of this great stories because the plotlines are always humorous and interesting to read because of how awkward you make the characters be around each other.
| Nikerdoodle chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
So cute !
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| KawaiiGirl chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
I absolutely love your Sasuke and Hinata stories! They're always refreshingly different and keeps me on my toes because they so nicely constructed.
| animegafan123 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Awwwsh! This is adorable, cute, sweet and just...kyan!... Ok I was giggling by the end of the fic and all.. I like how you make their relationship develop in your fics.. It feels more natural than the overrated "I don't know you, haven't talked to you in my life but hey! I love you"... I think is quite hard to develop a relationship in a oneshot (considering you dont get the space a multichapter fic has) but I am quite impressed on how you managed to do it... and with such a great result to boot!