|Reviews for Unplanned Incidents|
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/20
Can you do one where everyone reacts to the new Naruto isn't Kakashi's son. You alluded to what happened with the general population but can you do something with it? After all, going from overprotective father to dutiful student and bodyguard to most people will cause changes for Kakashi. You said everyone, probably barring those closest, forgot or ignored that Kakashi riased him so can show that impact? Or are you waiting for the main story-line?
| LadyRaider92 chapter 10 . 6/26
oh I just can't wait for this to be a part of the UP story
| LadyRaider92 chapter 1 . 6/26
Awww I'm just !ovin this chapter Ah the joys of changing diapers. Naruto is very cunning when he wants to be I just love the shirt. LOL LOL LOL LOL Awww. the first part was so sweet and sad... follow by a very funny (and totally out of the blue) everyone being in a boring lecture... kinda curious as to what tge topic was
| LN Tora chapter 7 . 6/14
I can't say I agree with Jiraiya at all on that last part. Minato is dead, he doesn't have a place, let alone first. Now the smothering bit, yes that's problematic, but I think Kakashi's friends would be a better help there. I dunno, it just feels like Jiraya is thinking about a dead student more than the living. Plus, who's to say Minato wouldn't be just as bad? He would just have had Kushina to help in that regard so he wouldn't smother Naruto. Again, though, I don't think Jiraiya's plan will work well. The other jounin have a better plan imo. Of course this is all just speculation and not really a review of sorts, but the fact that it pulls me in enough to warrant such thought makes it a well written piece to me. Thanks for sharing.
| Noradin chapter 11 . 6/6
I do not understand why everyone always insists on these scenes where brothers and fathers issue threats. It is so demeaning towards the one being "protected", showing such a lack of trust in them by demonstrating they think they have to verbally issue threats in advance.
It is also doing an incredible disservice, poisoning the relationship like this, thereby forcing their child or sibling to choose between them and their partner.
I'm just glad I never had to witness it happening in reality, I would be hard pressed to hide my disdain for them, showing their mistrust of a close blood relation so openly-I couldn't even call it a family. Family does not undermine each other like this.
Family does not threaten family "just in case".
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 11 . 6/3
ah man...that's adorable...that is utterly adorable
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 10 . 6/3
oooooh god I LOVE THIS
THIS IS AMAZING
ok so we now know Naruto, and everyone else, will find out before he turns 16 (is that in physical terms or the age-trick terms i.e. after the revelation does he start going by his actual age and has been alive for 16 years now?) and he still loves Kakashi to pieces (of course he does i'm so happy to know Naruto is so exuberant in his insistence of that) and considers himself a Hatake right down to Sakumo still being his grandfather
its also very interesting that he definitely considers his situation better than Sasuke's, which additionally makes me wonder about what happened to Sasuke in this AU - does he go down the same path despite the different experiences and relationships?
plus acknowledgement even from Naruto that Tsume and Hiashi are basically family too just about melted my heart, especially with the specificity of the 'kinda adopted Dad because they think he's really young and kinda stupid even though he's a genius'
gah I love it so much...
not to mention Minato's reaction...jeez, an outsiders look at the AU so deep into it, with no context but the, like, 5 minutes he had with Naruto before dying himself...and Naruto's ANGER, it really blew me away, how outraged he was by Minato's actions, how defensive of Kakashi he was...I can't help but feel like Jirayia was wrong in Introspection: as shocked as he is here he doesn't seem like he'll fault Kakashi for this at all, or think it was a bad idea once he's got a grasp of why Naruto loves his dad so much. so ultimately he'll see his son and the boy he practically adopted himself and see them HAPPY and caring and cared FOR (because if there's one thing this shows it's that Naruto is perfectly willing to defend and support and protect Kakashi as vice versa) and that's where Jirayia was mistaken. the overprotectiveness was more like a hitch in the carpet that could have been dealt with earlier, before it got bigger, but ultimately can be smoothed down flat before it trips anyone and leaves a pathway for both of them to be infinitely happier than otherwise if they hadn't started this. I just love this so damn much...
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 9 . 6/3
ah man...the beginning of the 'I have parents' moment...
damn though...no wonder the others have such trouble taking his parenting skills completely seriously when they know it was disastrous from the start, that they have a right to point out further flaws to try to help...hence the 'intervention'
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 8 . 6/3
oh good god that makes so much sense! and I love it!
seriously, that's genuinely in character for everyone! how has Konoha survived this long?!
| PipeDreamPrayer chapter 7 . 6/3
ah hell...that sounds worrying...
especially since its so hard to tell who's right
is this better or worse for the two of them in the long run? I don't think anybody knows...
| GoTherka chapter 10 . 5/31
Aww this one is the best. I totally love it, it's exactly how I imagined this meeting to go in this fic :3
| Darkdray chapter 11 . 5/30
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 11 . 5/30
| bloodshound chapter 10 . 5/30
are these what could be or what will be unless stated otherwise?
Cause if it's what will be, i have a major urge to go delete my post on the main story as it questioned how to deal with this very issue.
What i get for not reading these first. XD
| bloodshound chapter 11 . 5/30
lol lol lolioliol.
no matter how bad arse you are, asking for a girls hand in marriage, even if it's only a formality, is still a terrifying, nerve wracking experience...