Reviews for LoveDeathLife
Ashtore chapter 6 . 11/30/2008
This fic has promise...but I would try to beef it up with more description. Most of the time the action is being described through the speech/dialoge and that can make for a really short bad fic.

Stretch out those descriptive abilities I know you have!
Musette Fujiwara chapter 6 . 6/1/2008

I missed in some of the fics I read the whole Vegeta freaking out because of emotions...
InherentlyDamned chapter 4 . 11/21/2007
DbzTeske chapter 6 . 9/5/2005
the last part was beautiful ) m,, thnks ;)
DbzTeske chapter 5 . 9/5/2005
oe,, oeh pregnant :p haha D lovely story :P whoehoe
DbzTeske chapter 3 . 9/5/2005
whahah cruel bulma :P Vegeta tha playa :p
DbzTeske chapter 2 . 9/5/2005
ah sweet vegeta,, he is singing to her
DbzTeske chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
haha nice story,, I think I am the first one of 2005 :P hehe kinda late but that doesn't mind :p ... orignal story line.. love it ;)
Crecy chapter 6 . 8/9/2004
Sorry, but I can't picture VEGETA THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS sing "You are my sunshine". *Laughs* Veery kute though. *Grins* So is the whole story. I can't imagine it(Except in funny cartoons in my head -), but I like it.

Byez 4 Nowz

kate3635ca chapter 6 . 12/12/2003
Hey i love your fics
mail me when you write the sequel!
Slashypotterness chapter 4 . 8/7/2003
YOu should make the chapters longer.
Slashypotterness chapter 3 . 8/7/2003
Go Vegeta!
Slashypotterness chapter 2 . 8/7/2003
Aw how sweet!
Slashypotterness chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
Oh that is so good!
Alexz chapter 2 . 7/9/2003
Oh my god. I haven't even finished reading it and I love it! Especially the song! I've been thinking of using that in one of my fics lately, becasue my Grandpa and/or my Mom used to (and still do) sing it to me whenever I was scared or upset. Good choice!
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