|Reviews for The Rift|
| Dovahkiin chapter 14 . 10/14/2013
I watched Rise Of The Guardians and it was awesome. I watched it with my mom, my dad, and my sister. This fanfic is really awesome.u can't end it here! But I really don't like fiolee things I think it should be Fionna and Finn. I really want to read more of this story I am not old enough to write my own fanfic so I read as many as I can. And here are some book suggestions: Iron-Hearted Violet, Rangers Apprentice, Brotherband Chronicles, and The Ruby Key. Plz write more!
| EProspit chapter 6 . 7/24/2013
1) If you don't already know about this here; YOU WOULD LOVE !
2) I love you
3) you gave me a Merlin reference. :) thx
| Fan1275 chapter 14 . 6/16/2013
I know this isn't relevent to what you ask your reads to do but I love your story. Im new to Fanfition and Ive been reading storys that might help me get a feel on how to start my up coming story. Thanks for your story and your help. Please write more.
| TheBird0f-Hermes chapter 14 . 5/24/2013
to be honest, i created this account for the sole purpose of writing this review. This is the first Fic i have ever read and just may be the last. this, however, will not be the last Fic i read because it is not good. no in fact it is because it is good. it is very good indeed and for the author to just abandon her word like this is heartbreaking. I've waited patiently for the author to hold her end of the deal, but to no avail it seems. The author set a system for update, well we have 300 reviews yet there seems to be no sign of an update from the author. i am sad. though some chapters were rushed it seems i thoroughly enjoyed this Fic.
| Aripeace chapter 14 . 5/24/2013
I just saw this chapter, and I saw the movie with my family of five and my three other friends. I have to say it was the best movie I've seen in a while...
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/9/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| Tinycha chapter 14 . 4/14/2013
I LITERALLY SHRIKED WHEN YOU BROUGHT UP ROTG. THAT MOVIE IS GODLY OMFG.
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 9 . 4/1/2013
wow marc is in trubel
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
O-_-O must read on
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 7 . 4/1/2013
O_O your jking about the Jake x Marceline paring right?
ummm ow that hole the Mushroom War thing sooo good
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 6 . 4/1/2013
so what hapin with "the war"
The Belgariad is a five-book fantasy epic written by David Eddings. it is reley good
my dad read me it and it was good
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
"Princess Bubblegum never seems to notice me"
TToTT poor finn don't worey you will get a grate princess
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
XD And then he heard it. That wicked laugh XD IQ ;3
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
"But then there was the war" .OO. so sad
| 22darkmoon22 chapter 2 . 4/1/2013