|Reviews for Greater Good|
| Melissa chapter 15 . 4/25
If what I found is correct, then a "clubhouse turn" is the turn immediately after the finish line, closest to the grandstands.
Unless it's a "half-chute," where the halfway & turning point is the 'clubhouse turn.'
But either way, I really like your story. Excellent writing.
| Melissa chapter 7 . 4/25
I just read chapter 7's "rant." You go writer. You put the "flamer" in their place with a great deal of maturity & restraint. In my 'opinion.' I agree with your view of the relationship between McGee & Gibbs. I believe the reason canon doesn't appear to, is because McGee never Really gets hurt in the show. But for those who don't see how Gibbs views McGee, I will refer you to season 14, episode 23- the point just after Delilah collapses. When McGee needs Gibbs, Gibbs is there for him. Rushes to Tim to provide comfort, encouragement & support. Gibbs is there for all his kids.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/8/2016
If I were any good at writing NCIS fanfics, i'd try to incorporate Lab Bat into it, just for how perfect that is. Same reviewer from the previous review, typing on a stupidly touch sensitive phone, so that's why it just cut off after 'food', which was so not the word of choice. Rock on. Get those flamers girl! #bodyswivel #ohsnap.
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/8/2016
Hi, uhm, really living what I'm reading so far. Just, really juicy. Fun. I love the 'Lab Bat' thing, that was epic. You should trademark that shit. If I were any food
| marthapreston4 chapter 14 . 4/19/2015
I like hearing from the dog point of view
| marthapreston4 chapter 8 . 4/18/2015
Why is gibbs still yelling at someone who got the crap beat out of them you would think he would be nicer
| marthapreston4 chapter 6 . 4/18/2015
Okay the superhero thing is where you lost me but I will seee where this goes
| marthapreston4 chapter 4 . 4/18/2015
When will they learn keeping secrets never works out well
| marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 4/18/2015
Wow I know ziva cares but I dont really showing that emotion
| marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 4/18/2015
awwww poooer timmy
| Kyrianae Narii chapter 20 . 3/13/2014
AWESOME! I adored the story line, taking an idea and making it all your own. Brilliantly awesome.
| Saissa chapter 20 . 8/12/2013
I've read Periphery - great story!
But this was a great story as well.
And I stayed up to 0330 in the AM to read it!
| Saissa chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
I just finished reading the first 3 chapters you have up already on that Roops Point story - so far its FANTASTIC!. It's called Line in the Sand.
I hope you do continue it.
| Saissa chapter 12 . 8/12/2013
OK so now I have a reason to detest Keating the next time I watch that episode - Last Man standing...
| Saissa chapter 7 . 8/11/2013
This is an AU - an Alternative Universe - (And fictional as you state).
OF course things are going to be different.
I would HATE to be reading only written regurgitations and reruns of the same old episodes we see on TV. That would be BORING!