Reviews for War and the Soul
Guest chapter 2 . 9/1/2011
It's not really about the dead bodies or grief but how he interacts with the people and how he thinks internally. That doesn't match the personality he grew into at the end of DH. There he was confident, yours isn't really. And nothing happened in between for Harry to change his self assurance from a plot perspective. You should really consider this.
SSJ Leia chapter 2 . 8/31/2011
I disagree; I like your Harry. He feels real. His grief and his hesitation at wanting to see dead bodies is totally human. You've done a great job capturing the voices of the different characters. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Your Harry feels like a wimp and not like the one at the end of DH who went through his death, met Dumbledore and then beat Voldemort. That Harry wouldn't act like yours does.
13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Dear Phara Parade,

Very promising, very well written! I love the plot, the story is certainly unique and original. Everyone is written realistically and in character, which is always great to see.

I await anxiously for the next chapter! Take care.

- Akira Kuran
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