Reviews for The Unexpected Visit
Caelum1427 chapter 11 . 3/24
you liar you didn't update this story !
Caelum1427 chapter 11 . 3/24
you liar you didn't update this story !
Shiro chapter 11 . 12/22/2015
I'LL wait for the next chapter so i hope you see or read this i hope you will update soon even though the last update was on 2014 thanks btw i love this story so if you ever read this i hope you'll still continued this story thanks:)
cristallina chapter 11 . 4/25/2015
wow so good!
hope they'll get to reveal themselves to the 1st generation soon!
Shadow22739 chapter 11 . 3/29/2015
This is such a amazing story! I hope you will still be able to write more. Goodluck, I'll be waiting for more -
Guest chapter 10 . 3/28/2015
I would like you to continue the story
MochiIce chapter 11 . 12/23/2014
This is really funny. I'm glad you're continuing the story. Hope it gets updated soon or rewritten.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 4 . 7/16/2014
Turf top there you are." Ryohei said as he made his way towards the rest,

Ryohei is Turf Top. So is there another him there? Or am I wrong? Is he Tako Head?
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 3 . 7/16/2014
I love Hibird, Hibari is a nice touch.
10th Squad 3rd Seat chapter 2 . 7/16/2014
conan-inuyasha chapter 8 . 6/25/2014
in chapter 7 u asked if the vongola rings would be Vongola Gear in this story line . And in the intro u said that Tsuna & Enma are now friends so yes in would be Vongola Gear because the rings got ruined in the fight at the inheritance

The first generation is pretty dense in your story . I mean Tsuna &co are describing the guardian that they asked about and the first generation is not putting 2 2 together.
conan-inuyasha chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Primo's time was 400 years ago not 150.
Allykrau chapter 11 . 6/16/2014
Uhhh can't wait don't mind if you do :3
Lite Crystal27 chapter 11 . 6/16/2014
Hehe Good luck to you And looking forward for your new TUV :3
KiraLoveless chapter 11 . 6/15/2014
Yay! I cant wait for the revised version. Update soon
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