Reviews for Promnight Dance
Flamer chapter 1 . 8/12
Ya uhm... you are being flamed. So ha... I guess? Please make more thank you have a nice day...In hell hahahahahahahahahaaaa!
kittyKat010 chapter 1 . 7/28
well that Was hot, sweet, and Just absolutely amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1
Wow! that was just beautiful my heart was racing at the speed of light it was lightning FAST! it was so beautiful that I fell asleep smiling and my mouth also opened when I read about Baljeet punching a jock and being #1in tai kwondo
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19
That was potato
Luis chapter 1 . 4/13
Very good lemon. Seems like a believable AU. Like the ending, its not corny. Keep writing epic lemons. Do a Ferb and Gretchen one but in the same universe as this story, that would be ecstatically nice!
Anon chapter 1 . 3/12
I liked it but u should have talked about her pussy more
Rebb R-001 chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Its not actually :) the story is quite intense and Cool in many angles :)
EnergeticBullet chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Great story! Really, the storyline was aweshome! I especially liked that you made it into a flashback. Btw. when a girl pushes her breasts onto you, then yeah XD that was kinda' accurrate. Again, great story! Fav, follow with every checkbox.
Peace,
matemate01
Rowling's Daughter chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
Sweet ending.
More more chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Make another chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Make 1 more chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Great story! But nobody says "ya" normally in speech. They say "yeah". Can you just try to keep that in mind next time?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
I loved the story, but maybe interpret Phineas's friends into it a little more; like maybe Ferb would come home with Gretchen and Baljeet and Ginger, looking for Phineas and Isabella or to start an after party or something and then they hear something from upstairs and Ferb has to sleep in the car. Then in the morning Ferb would be downstairs drinking coffee or on a laptop and Isabella comes down in Phineas's tshirt (OR Phineas comes down) and her hair all messed up or something - I'M SORRY I'LL GO ON FOREVER IF I DON'T STOP NOW I'LL JUST GO WRITE IT DOWN SOMEWHERE ELSE GOOD JOB BYE
guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
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Qwerty chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
Great!
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