Reviews for The Beginning
samus18 chapter 7 . 2/10
I know you wrote this years ago, but I desperately hope you can find it in yourself to continue it someday. XD It was one of the better Shark Tale fics I've ever read, and I'm so sad it ended... :)
samus18 chapter 5 . 2/9
It's funny to imagine Feinberg doing all the things he does in this story... XD That tired old face from the movie sure had me fooled!
samus18 chapter 4 . 2/9
Super-interesting chapter - can't wait to see how the relationship between Don Lino and Melanie progresses. :) Lol at the characterization of Don Feinberg. XDD
samus18 chapter 2 . 2/9
I feel sorry for poor Melanie; so confused and unable to understand what's going on. This story is getting better and better - can't wait to find out what happens next.
samus18 chapter 1 . 2/9
I'm loving this so far, it's very precious, well-written, and I already adore Melanie. _
AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Actually, it cannot be your FIRST fanfic, because you already done "A Great White Lie".
GeneralLee01Girl chapter 7 . 12/16/2011
Wow. This is coming along rather good. I really like this story! But Don Feinberg, when will he learn. And Cookie Cutter Sharks are weird looking. But I sense love in the water...do they start dating or something later? If they do, I can't wait!

Btw, are you going to update your other story soon? The suspense is killing me!
GeneralLee01Girl chapter 5 . 10/18/2011
Oh Lino is in love...wonder how Melanie feels about him. And nothing was wrong with chapter 4. Your doing great writing your first story!
GeneralLee01Girl chapter 4 . 10/15/2011
Aww...you haven't stopped writing your story now have ya? You got a good start.
killer18B chapter 4 . 10/14/2011
Is it me or you stopped writing your story?
justcruisin'along chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Omg! What's going to happen next?
kimkat chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
wow! three chptrs already! You are soo talented! keep it going!
GeneralLee01Girl chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Nice chapter. I'm starting to figure out how Lenny became a vegetarian. So I guess since since tires out easily, she'll have to live of kelp, if she can ever get out the net.
killer18B chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
Keep it going :) I like it :):):)
ladyanaconda chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
poor melanie¡ left alone innthe sea¡ what will happen when she meets her future husband?good chapter¡ keep it up¡
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