Reviews for The Brightest Witch of Her Age
Mrs Yaya chapter 26 . 12/26/2011
This was a great story and having Sara connected to Bella is wonderful. I look forward to the next part.
PSay chapter 26 . 12/23/2011
This is a good chapter with a sad topic. I'm so sorry Bellatrix pre-marked Sarah. What a burden to bear. Of course Harry reacts to the mark because of the horcrux he carries. I wish Sarah would tell her parents off. They are so cold and uncaring about Sarah and what is going on with her except for what affects them. Of course they should be worried about her if they haven't heard from her for 2 months. They only seem to be worried if it affects them though. Not good parents in my opinion. I'm glad Dumbledore told Sarah that he wants her to stay close with Harry, Ron and Hermione. That is a little surprising. I'm not surprised he is blaming Harry for the whole thing. I'm glad Sarah has friends for them but this is going to be a rough time for her. I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 25 . 12/10/2011
This is really bad. Sarah has been marked by Bellatrix and Dumbledore and Snape cannot remove it without killing her? I hope there is some way to remove it eventually. In the meantime it will hurt her off and on. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 24 . 12/7/2011
Thank goodness they have discovered that Sarah is indeed alive. Of course she is hurt but she will be ok except for that mark that Bellatrix gave her. I hope Dumbledore can remove it but I'm sure it won't be that easy. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 23 . 12/7/2011
This is quite a battle. Sarah is really a great dueler since she managed to hold out against Bellatrix so long. Bella really is evil. She did trick Harry into thinking she had killed Sarah. Only being mad is probably what saved Sarah. Bella planned to come back and finish her off. Now Harry has run after Bella thinking Sarah is dead. I'm glad that Remus has realized there is a pulse. I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 22 . 11/28/2011
Wow! This is bad. Ron touched a prophesy sphere. That is what made him loopy to begin with. Then he summoned a brain and that did more damage. I'm glad Sarah destroyed it. Luna is out cold. So it Ginny with a broken ankle and Neville is unconcious. It looks like Harry is alone with all the Death Eaters after him. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 21 . 11/28/2011
This is good. I like the little changes you made. Including Sarah was well done. It didn't detract from the others. I look forward to how this next part goes. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 20 . 11/22/2011
This is a really different scene. I'm glad Sarah was there to help Harry. At least he had more time to try to reach Sirius. The fact that Draco was afraid of being hexed is a little funny. The fact that she used a strong cheering charm was funny. Hyterical laughter is a great way to disarm someone. It looks like Umbridge sent for Snape for the truth serum. I look forward to more of this story. I hope Sarah doesn't have a really severe concuscion. pms
PSay chapter 18 . 11/22/2011
Umbridge is so past legal it isn't funny. The blood quill alone would put her in Askaban. Stealing a student's mail is really criminal and needs to be dealt with. Having Sarah use the quill until she needed a blood replenishing potion was outrageous. I look forward to the day when she get punnished for all of this. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 17 . 11/22/2011
Well things are not going well. Sarah is taking the brunt of the torture from Umbridge but it is clear she is suffering from loss of too much blood. You can't keep bleeding every night for over 3 hours and not feel the effects. That and Umbridge is keeping her from dinner too. Hagrid and Grawp are a problem but nothing the group can do anything about. I'm glad Harry told Sirius and Remus about the image he saw in Snape's pensieve. I look forward to more of this story and I hope Umbridge gets into trouble for using the blood quill. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 16 . 10/30/2011
I'm glad that Sarah stood up to the Inquisitorial Squad and Umbridge but noone deserves to be tortured by a blood quill for 3 and a half hours everynight. She will be losing a lot of blood. I hope they get rid of Umbridge soon. It is going to be interesting to see how Sirius and Remus respond to Harry's opinion of their "pranks"! I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 15 . 10/28/2011
This is good. I'm sorry Sarah had to belch up slugs but at least it accomplished what Hermione meant it to do. It disracted the Minister and got Sarah away from them all. It is excellent that Hermione was able to counter the curse so quickly. Too bad Dumbledore has to leave again. I look forward to more of this story. pms
ashtonangel13 chapter 16 . 10/27/2011
aw poor sarah... at least she has good handwriting... i cant wait for the next chapter
PSay chapter 12 . 10/7/2011
This is interesting. I'm glad that Harry got to go to Grimauld Place with Ron and his family for Christmas. It is too bad Mr. Weasley got hurt but at least he survived. I'm glad Sarah sent them Christmas presents. I 'm surprised her overbearing parents didn't have her come home for Christmas so they could give her a bad time about her studies and choice of friends. But then Sarah was probably happier at school except for her exfriends tailing her. It sounds like they are part of Umbridge's Imperiale Squad trying to find out more about Harry and what Dumbledore is doing. I'm sure the boys would like to kick Luke for what he has done to Sarah. She is a good addition to their group but I understand why they are cautious about her. I'm glad they have givien her more background on what is going on. I hope she gets Harry to stop these so called "occlumency lessons" with Snape. They don't do Harry any good. I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 11 . 10/4/2011
This is good. Sarah was able to tell them about the room of requirement. I'm glad she is adding positive things for the group to use. The fact that she helped Neville do better at his casting was great. Harry asking about Sarah being exorcized was unexpected. I think Harry empathises with Sarah living with people that expect a person to do so much without personal support. He certainly didn't get personal support with the Durseley's. I look forward to more of this story. pms
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