Reviews for Smrabbles
los.kav chapter 3 . 2/24/2012
If you looked up "Plot? What plot?" in a dictionary, there'd just be this story. Although if this story was in the dictionary, there'd be a lot more people reading the dictionary and leaving eloquent reviews.

Love it!
los.kav chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
*head explodes from the smutty goodness*
Clarkeyfangirl chapter 10 . 2/19/2012
When you thought you had escaped... She's baaaaaack :sleep:

Ohhhhh... two new chapters of hotness, thank you Miiiiiiiss Coooooookie!

I laaarve them both,and you have a gift for making the simplest little things really, really hot and sexy... And we all laarve you for it!

Keep them coming, dear! xxxxx
AllAboutMystery chapter 10 . 2/12/2012
O.M.G! I'm still recovering from the last one...

Dominant Christian is hot but dominant Syed is mindblowing! This is officially my favourite chapter, is there anything better than tiger Syed? You'll just have to surprise me :P

Christian pleading and giving in ... so very hot!

FAB-U-LOUS! Muchas Gracias I loved this
AllAboutMystery chapter 9 . 2/12/2012
*wolf whistles*

GUH! Blimey this was HOT!

Larve dominant Christian ... "Say it, or you know I'm not going to let you come." *dies*

Smug christian is the Christian I love best! So in character :)

Enjoyed reading and thanks for sharing :)
Your Angel of Music chapter 10 . 2/9/2012
Hun, you know how much I love this...but I'm going to try and put it into words.

The image of Christian, who is traditionally (and wrongly, I believe) perceived as the 'strong one', the one in control or the dominant one in their relationship, mostly due to his physical size, being the one who is submissive, looked after and giving over control completely - it's just GUH, on so many levels. I loved how you immediately phrased it as Syed wanting to look after Christian, to make him feel good - it didn't come from any kind of power trip or ego boost, it came from the fact that Syed wants to help Christian to NOT have to be the strong one, to let him be the one who has things done to him. The only other times that Christian has had things done to him have been negative - the various bashings, for example - and this is Syed showing him that he doesn't have to be in control, and that sometimes the best things can come if he just lets go.

Syed is dominating, but deeply affectionate at the same time; and Christian is submissive, and willingly so, handing himself to Syed because the trust is totally and utterly there. I LOVE the image of a fully clothed Syed giving pleasure to a totally naked Christian - it's not just the physical manifestation of domination, or indeed that Christian is the vulnerable one, open and trusting, but that Syed is completely setting his own physical pleasure to one side in favour of Christian's. Like in the last fic you wrote, Syed gains pleasure from giving Christian pleasure, just as Christian gained pleasure from giving Syed's pleasure, and I love that about them. They are each other's best aphrodisiac, and you write that aspect of their relationship so well.

I'm full of gushy squee over this, I adore ever inch of it, and I want more!
elphaba7589 chapter 10 . 2/7/2012

Dominant Syed has to be one of the hottest things ever! :D So quiet and reserved on the surface and then alone with Christian, he can truly be free and release the tiger inside him! :D

You capture Chryed perfectly, their passion, their longing, their love, Christian's desperation for Syed, the way Syed practically worships Christian's body!

Hot, gorgeous fic x
Jennafleur chapter 10 . 2/7/2012

Looooved this, even more than the last one if that was even possible!

More biting and licking...HEADBOARD!

Syed is a bloody tease. Lovedlovedloved frustrated Christian. "Christian growled and reached up, pulling Syed forward by the collar of his shirt. He kissed him hard, wrapping a leg around his waist and thrusting his hips up against him." - whoaaaa, very hot! :D

Another gorgeous tender ending too!

Cookie has a talent for writing smut. Who'd have thought it? -_-

queenrach chapter 9 . 2/6/2012
I love this! You write Syed's desperation really well, and dominant Christian is HOT -_-

Particularly liked this line - 'He delighted in the bruising grip on his hips, the scrape of nails on his skin, the sharp bites soothed by the warm tongue' - pain is sexy -_-

The last line was surprisingly tender as well, a nice way to finish. Another fabulous smrabble, my darling ;) xx
Jennafleur chapter 9 . 2/6/2012
*insert stream of gushing praise*

LAAAAARVED this one. I probably say it in every chapter -_- but this one is one of my favourites, for sure!

Scratching, biting, licking...sweating. And Syed biting the pillow, refusing to say please even though he WANTS it, because it means letting Christian win, is just...guh.

Jesus Christ, the line about the particularly brutal thrust was so hot. As was Christian's line, "Say it, or you know I'm not going to let you come." Particularly because it suggests they have done this before...many times. -_-

Had to lol at typically cocky Christian feeling victorious because Syed gave in. And the bit after that...*fans self*

The last line is bloody adorable.

EEEEEEEEE I love it. I mean, just slightly. -_-

ChryedLover chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
Um, wow.

What hot imagery!

A snippet of an intense moment, but it's laced with sexiness and pure lust... guh, perfect combination..

"Say it, or you know I'm not going to let you come." - That line is far more sexy than it's supposed to be!

Can't quote any more lines otherwise I'll be cp this whole fic!

Only criticism - Far too short.. I need more... :p

Love CC

Your Angel of Music chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
Orgasm denial is one of my favourite kinks - and I LOVE it with these two here. I adore the two of them and the way you've portrayed them: Christian asserting himself as the dominant one, the one in control - Syed's stubbornness, his refusal to let Christian take completely control of the situation even if it means denying himself pleasure. And Syed's smugness at Christian's own desperation, as he loses some of that control that he's trying to maintain a hold on, as if Christian is now at Syed's mercy...and then Syed giving in to Christian's control, but it's not a bad thing, because they both get what they want and they come together and its gorgeous.

Yeah, did I mention that I love this kink?

I also love the way you describe Syed as biting the pillow - its a very sensual (as well as a hot) piece, you can feel every single sensation and smell every smell. I found the image of Syed burying his face in the pillow to try and stop himself from giving in to be very, very hot and adorable all at the same time.

Brava, brava, MOAR PLEASE!

Mercs xxxxx
sweetkitty chapter 9 . 2/5/2012
The only thing I can say it WOW! I want more.

Suggestion: Let Z catch them and then let Amira catch them having sex.
ChryedLover chapter 8 . 1/10/2012

Plane fic :D

Hmm, totally worth the wait :p

I love the fact that it was Syed who suggested it in the first place, little minx ;) And Christians surprise was adorable as well! I laughed when Syed looked up to see him watching him!

I thought Syed asking Christian permission in the bathroom was totally adorable too.

The smut itself was spot on and totally in character. Something tells me that when they arrive in Florida, they're going to need alone time ASAP :p

Thank youuuuu!

Love CC

Your Angel of Music chapter 8 . 10/22/2011
You know I like this one ;) It is so something they would do - I bet Christian was just waiting for them to decide to go and see his mother, if only for the chance to join the exclusive club they have now joined.

I do love how, although its PWP (nowt wrong with PWP, in my mind!), it's still THEM. Still those characters; you can tell distinctly whose who (as a lot of PWPs fall into the trap of just being sex - y'know, the kinda thing that you could take out 'Christian' and 'Syed', and swap them around, or replace them completely with randomers, and the overall effect would be the same) and you can hear the voices. This is the kind of PWP I likee very much :D


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