Reviews for One Step To Becoming A Man
Guest chapter 3 . 7/14/2016
iloveNCIStiva chapter 3 . 9/5/2011
next chapterr!
Hiby248248 chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Very good! I actually really like their conversations (: keep updating :DDD
TivaBelieva.x.x.x chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Really liked this chapter. Glad they talked :) where will it lead?... update soon :D
TonyandZivaUK chapter 3 . 9/4/2011
Such a good chapter! I really really enjoyed it!
Hiby248248 chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
Update! Update! Update! I really want to see their conversation :)
TonyandZivaUK chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
I love this chapter! You really need to write more! I can not wait to read it!
pia chapter 2 . 9/3/2011
nooooooooo! please update soon, you are so evil to leave it on such a cliffy {
Guest chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
Nothing really happened in this chapter... need to pack more in and mover it on. Need to weight the dialogue.
luzma chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
yeesss,please continue
TivaBelieva.x.x.x chapter 2 . 9/2/2011
A good chapter. It was more original for them to IM each other :) obviously they have a lot of talking to do - I think tony should convince ziva not to get back with ray.

I have a feeling there will be a lot of revelations and confessions.

But no spontaneous kissing it's a bit OOC sometimes.

Okay, now that I think about it, it wouldn't surprise me if tony tells ziva to do what she thinks is right.

But she won't stay with C. , right? This was long review...

Anyway loving the story, please update soon :)
tivaandmcabby chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
i can see this going somewhere great - cant wait for the next chapter :D
NCIS Connection chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
please up date soon!
transmuting chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Awwwww :( That's so sad. But it's sweet at the same time. You did a good job expressing Tony's emotions in this and I really liked it. It seemed like one of the many awkward conversations we see them have in the show, where they say things without really... saying anything.

Good job! I'm so happy you wrote this.

- Sean
TivaBelieva.x.x.x chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Thank goodness those two awful Tiva destroyers aren't in this. It's very good please continue. I hope they get together and that goes for the show too :)
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