|Reviews for Ringbearer|
| Claire'sShockAtJamieDueling chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| Saphirabrightscale chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Hm little short but ok
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I thought this was interesting for a drabble.
You did this scene well, and you get to see the Gollum side and Smeagol side. Quick question: where were they on the Quest? You didn't say.
Also, if you are telling the story in past tense, remember to keep the wording in past tense. If it present tense, do the same thing. This was something I picked up as I read this drabble or oneshot.
Anyway, good work.
| Gwyn Paige chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
That was short, but amazing. REALLY good writing as well, kudos for that! :)
Please write more stuff like this! Maybe you could turn this into a longer story, or maybe a collection of oneshots like this one?
| CrackinAndProudOfIt chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
What a poignant little drabble! It well portrayed Gollum and Frodo's emotions, while leaving us with something to reflect on, that moving last phrase,"...it didn't taste good yet." That line really sold the piece; it has so many underlying implications! Nice work!