|Reviews for The Man Comes Around|
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/29/2012
Aaaaaahhhhhh! I'm in love with Steve again! We can only hope that they do this well win the sequel!
| forgetmenotjimmy chapter 7 . 6/6/2012
| doodlechick12 chapter 7 . 5/25/2012
I loved this story. Steve goes across the country running from SHIELD just to deliver a letter - something I find amazing. I enjoyed your characterization and I think you did a wonderful job on this story :)
| Bombshell33 chapter 7 . 3/16/2012
Very nicely done!
| campumfugit chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
Nick Fury's Batman Gambit was amazing. I love how Steve got a chance to show off his smarts. He saw between the lines. XD.
This was a rewarding read. You know you don't have it marked complete tho?
Thanks for writing this!
| CampumFugit chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
The situation reminded me of earlier-when Steve wasn't sure what he could offer by going to the medic's funeral-there's people who meant something to us, but we don't feel like we were close enough to them to not being intruding on the people who did... Steve didn't know Bill's dad much, but he moved passed the awkwardness to offers the take he has on him. This is what makes Steve into our Steve. He knows that fulfilling his promise might not get him grand stand, change opinion, FEEL worth it...but he does it anyways!
Was that supposed to be a fake out? Sorry, I'm a DC girl-I assumed agent hawk was Hawkeye not Falcon and Rushman was Natasha not Agent 13 (who I've never heard of!) because I swimming in the sea of the murky unknown. ;)
Steve blew cover? Oops.
| CampumFugit chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Petty sport fan Steve cracked me up. I bet he feels less akward about lying now. ;) Poor guy. Still hates fondue.
Tony wanting the bad about his dad-he always does. It's like he needs someone else to tell him the nitty gritty because he feels guilty for his poor opinion on him when everyone else focuses on the PR stuff? IDK. Love the treading on it.
| CampumFugit chapter 4 . 11/27/2011
You know I just realized CampusFugit (Campus flies) should be CampumFugit (She flees campus) XD
Smart! Secret coded messages-that IS old school. This really fells like an old school adventure novel. It works really well.
I like how unlike normal of these types of stories, I don't want the seekers to catch up with the sought after! Well, I do. When it is most dramatic. I want Steve to do whatever he wants- I hope he doesn't get in trouble...but I think it would be interesting to see what would happen if they caught up to him-they respect him. They don't want to DO anything to him? But something would have to be done? I just mean I could see the irony there. The agents' actions make Steve into the bad guy when he's really the protagonist. I have a feeling i'm not making any sense now. I might as well go back to speaking latin? ;)
Amo illam fabulam; Illa fabula fit melior et optima. (i love this story. this story gets better and better). My latin sucks so lets stop this now.
The kid chatting with Steve is just adorable. When even his grandpa trusts steve, I smiled. Seriously, that's the real super power there.
TONY! My squee has killed me.
| CampusFugit chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
I like how Jones basically told Clint what type of thing Steve could be doing, but yet didn't. It's classy.
The look into what the agents are thinking about their treatment of Steve was much loved. I'm glad that at least one agent gets that Steve deserves more than babysat close to imprisonment. It also helps to have their rationale about why he needs kept undercover explained so frankly. It feels honest-they truly don't enjoy what they are doing and are not making these choices just to make things easier for themselves.
I know Steve has major courage now. HE WILLINGLY FACED PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION!
| CampusFugit chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
Shield's reactions were funny. I like how they're all frustrated and yet amazed that Steve got free.
Nice suspense too; you could have told us what Steve was going in this chappy but you didn't. XD
| CampusFugit chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I love the idea for this story. You've touched all the points I really wanted to see: Steve's culture shock, restlessness, aimlessness, bureaucracy dealing with Steve...
It's all good. XD
| Assassin of Oblivion chapter 7 . 11/24/2011
Oh this was SO good! And so real! :)
| Flaming Man of Iron chapter 7 . 11/19/2011
Cool story! I liked it quite a bit.
| Proponent of EVO chapter 7 . 11/8/2011
Absolutely fantastic fic. Great set-up for another series, should you want to write it, or the fic stands up on its own. Either way, great job, and thanks for writing.
| lazyguy90 chapter 7 . 10/11/2011
Great work. Hope you write more Captain America stuff. Keep at it.