|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 7/5
| msmargo chapter 1 . 7/5
Wow. How have I not read anything by you before? This was lovely. Now I must check out your other stories. This didn't win?
| juliana alicia miller chapter 1 . 4/20
beautiful... u should have been 1st!
| ficfangirl chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
Bella as a free spirit. Thank you for sharing.
| Debs0608 chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
| Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
I just read this for the first time and I loved it sooo much !
Love this contest, but your writing has always given me this satisfaction as a reader.
The very first thing I read by you was Diving Headlong and just now I find
this contest and more of your brilliantly written words...
So lovely.. almost poetic ... or, cut the almost...
thank you for still having this up for others to enjoy .. xox
| Fleur50 chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Lu avec Google Translate. French.
| enka3 chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
| debslmac chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
| brenda.warren.1257 chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
that was so great but I want so much more a life and those babies he dreamed about and her baking his birthday cake. THANK YOU
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
She finally found a place to land and be happy. I'd be happy with him grounding me, too! ;)
| irishnlove2shop chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Great story! :)
| NozomiMe chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
This was amazing.
'til next time...
| mommymac0508 chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
I loved it it took her leaving to figure out he was home so good thank you
| juicytreat2 chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
Perfect little story. Thanks for sharing it with us!