|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/18
I don't know if I care for Edward the lazy man whore.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14
ehh I'm growing so tired of whoreward stories...gross
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/14
This is written nicely but no, they are both nasty. At least Edward wants more from her. So fun being carefree and fucking everybody. Men who you refuse to give your name to. Classy.
| Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 11/28/2016
Thanks for writing this wonderfull story!
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
Loved this. I hope she doesn't leave him again. If she thinks she needs to, I hope he follows her. I want them to wander the whole earth together. To have all the adventures they possibly can, together. Thank you for this. :) ~Christy
| compass54 chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
This was gorgeous. I LOVED it :D
| hikingurl chapter 1 . 9/21/2016
Oh that was good, just so good. Thank you
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
| msmargo chapter 1 . 7/5/2016
Wow. How have I not read anything by you before? This was lovely. Now I must check out your other stories. This didn't win?
| juliana alicia miller chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
beautiful... u should have been 1st!
| ficfangirl chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
Bella as a free spirit. Thank you for sharing.
| Debs0608 chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
| Pa Trizia 88 chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
I just read this for the first time and I loved it sooo much !
Love this contest, but your writing has always given me this satisfaction as a reader.
The very first thing I read by you was Diving Headlong and just now I find
this contest and more of your brilliantly written words...
So lovely.. almost poetic ... or, cut the almost...
thank you for still having this up for others to enjoy .. xox
| Fleur50 chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Lu avec Google Translate. French.
| enka3 chapter 1 . 10/23/2014