|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| aciepey chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
A well deserved (almost) win, bb! a great story that illustrates so well that even wanderers have homes. ;)
| chvz chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
| Taniadanoff chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Beautiful story of a beautiful girl...I bet you're beautiful too!
| mamato chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
As always, I love your writing, and your ability to tell a story. But...I really disliked...no maybe, more like lacked respect for this Edward. He was a fly by the seat of your pants kind of guy, and while that's great, he isn't held accountable for his actions. He's a manwhore, and even though he's spotted a woman he wants, he won't even lift a finger to woo her. He is so used to waiting for women to come to him, that he's lazy and spoiled. And, even after he gets her, it's just so easy for him to find someone else to fill the space. No morals, no conscience, to loyalty. How could he ever be trusted if his philosophy is to do whatever feels good?
Yeah, Bella is an idiot, and this Edward had no redeemable qualities about him.
| tiffanyashm chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
| katriane018 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
you always make me cry with your stories... more please
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I thought your entry was far and away the best o/s. I absolutely loved it!
| OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I loved it. Great job! Is this all of it, or will there be more?
| leajones chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Best I have read in a while! Loved it more than I can say I wish it was a longer fic! Thanks for sharing it with us!
| Cullen Mascot chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
That was beautiful. Very cool.
Plus I can see maui from my house.
Love stories set in the islands. Ahhh surfward!
| blackcat05 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
What a great story. But the problem with one-shots is that I am always left wanting more. What would happen if they took a trip back to Chicago together. Or even better Edward's family came to visit?
| NotTooOldForThis chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Lovely, just lovely.
| JackBadJuJu chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Awesome! Makes me want to go surfing. LOL! Really though great story. Really made my day.
| bella0609 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
You definitely should have won first prize . . . I loved it! Loved the story, the "stars". You are an incredible writer! Thanks for sharing your creativity and talent. I really appreciate it :)
| MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I loved this story. Usually when I read most o/s stories they are not enough. Although I'd love to know more about these two, I'm satisfied with the love story between them. They are perfect for each other. Although their relationship is not traditional and neither of them are "saints" they bring an ease and peace to the other's soul. For these two, that seems like everything. Thanks for sharing.
Oh, I'm assuming that Jasper is her brother and Alice her sister-inlaw because Rose was the friend she visited.