|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| Beanie Cullen chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Lovely...I'm so glad they found home in each other :)
| HereToRead84 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
That is a cute story
| Melolabel chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
| BernieR chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Ooo, hot and lovely! :)
| Ivygirl702 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Gah. This was perfect.
Favorite line: "And that if you fall into the orchestra pit, your mom will buy you ice cream. And ice cream makes everything better."
Thanks for sharing with us.
| What Obsession17 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
This is AWESOME!
| heyjued chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Kudos, well done.
| avidreader69 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
It was a poetic love story.
| saraamin chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Wow i wanna run to the nearest tattoo store and tattoo in a star me too. What kind of tattoo/s do you have?
| Alinka chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
I like your story XD and your Edward's view of the Moloka'I's people is exactly the same with the one I had for my thematic class. Does the name Moloka'I still exist in Hawaii now?
| RosaBella75 chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
UNGH! Sooo good! Loved the mystery and the build and the sweet and beautiful end! Five stars! ;D
Thanks for writing and sharing!
| Tdot TwiFic chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
Great, now I want to move to Hawaii and fulfil my dream of living on the beach and attempting surfing all while being homeless.
| CdrIvanova chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Oh this was terrific! Thanks!
| vamploverrr chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Damn jandco! That wench! Lol! jkjk! I love her too! Awesome story! I'm so happy she came back to him!
| Lurecyka chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Wow ! that o/s is awesome ! Your writing is so good... I never have enough ! Thanks for sharing this with us :)