Reviews for Beautiful Girl
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I don't have the words to describe the fabulousness of this story. Absolutely loved reading it.
justluey chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
It was really good! And, well ... Beautiful !
KLL77 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Such a lovely story.
Songirl chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Anna, you amaze me. You are truly a gifted writer. I love how you channel this casual masculinity into your male characters like the tomboy you are. I took days to read this slowly, savouring the details, the atmosphere, all of the vast spaces and meanings between the things you don't say. This is your sweet spot ( a little Ro like! And that's a compliment.)

Do you care if I say it was hot? Probably not, but i love subtlety and the porn writers and their holes and body fluuds could learn a thing or two... The part about eyeing her belly? Shivers.

I liked the narrative voice-such a casual dude. Have you been to Hawaii? Have you surfed? I was convinced, thoroughly. Thanks for raising the bar as always.

Jen
Jaws28 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
LOVED IT!
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
AHH! I loved it!
chrom chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
hi Angel :-) happy to "hear" from you.. your story made me cry a little. and yes they are - our loved ones just made things all right. thanks!
DorothyInDisguise chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Amazing. Magical. Wow. I have nothing else to say.
shaqbarcalis chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Awesome story! I loved it
Erikajo chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Bella is right! This was a beautiful story for sure! :)

Greta job!
Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Sweet! Thanks!
NKubie chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I'm so glad you rose to the challenge! It was like a piece of dark chocolate with caramel inside. It felt bittersweet for most of it until I bit in the end and it had a sweet creamy finish. :)

There's a reason I have your stories on alert!
LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I can't remember how I reviewed this during the contest. I know I voted for it because I fucking loved it. When Bella came back to Edward, I'm pretty sure I squeed a bit because I just knew you were going to have her keep on truck'in her life away. I'm so glad you didn't.
kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
loved this! thanks for writing!
GeezerWench chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I enjoyed this one!

Bella had him from the start.
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