|Reviews for Beautiful Girl|
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I don't have the words to describe the fabulousness of this story. Absolutely loved reading it.
| justluey chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
It was really good! And, well ... Beautiful !
| KLL77 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Such a lovely story.
| Songirl chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Anna, you amaze me. You are truly a gifted writer. I love how you channel this casual masculinity into your male characters like the tomboy you are. I took days to read this slowly, savouring the details, the atmosphere, all of the vast spaces and meanings between the things you don't say. This is your sweet spot ( a little Ro like! And that's a compliment.)
Do you care if I say it was hot? Probably not, but i love subtlety and the porn writers and their holes and body fluuds could learn a thing or two... The part about eyeing her belly? Shivers.
I liked the narrative voice-such a casual dude. Have you been to Hawaii? Have you surfed? I was convinced, thoroughly. Thanks for raising the bar as always.
| Jaws28 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
| Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
AHH! I loved it!
| chrom chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
hi Angel :-) happy to "hear" from you.. your story made me cry a little. and yes they are - our loved ones just made things all right. thanks!
| DorothyInDisguise chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Amazing. Magical. Wow. I have nothing else to say.
| shaqbarcalis chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Awesome story! I loved it
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Bella is right! This was a beautiful story for sure! :)
| Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
| NKubie chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I'm so glad you rose to the challenge! It was like a piece of dark chocolate with caramel inside. It felt bittersweet for most of it until I bit in the end and it had a sweet creamy finish. :)
There's a reason I have your stories on alert!
| LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I can't remember how I reviewed this during the contest. I know I voted for it because I fucking loved it. When Bella came back to Edward, I'm pretty sure I squeed a bit because I just knew you were going to have her keep on truck'in her life away. I'm so glad you didn't.
| kmfroggi chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
loved this! thanks for writing!
| GeezerWench chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I enjoyed this one!
Bella had him from the start.