Reviews for Beautiful Girl
MsNinnie chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I absolutely LOVED THIS! I took me back to my summer vacations away to stay at my cousins and the best summer flings.

Beautifully written, it has a great flow and you have a wonderful voice.

love love love!
HeyHedy chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Awesome story! I'm so glad she came back!

Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Gah, everything you write is just sheer perfection.
keyboardkath chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Your one-shots are my favorites. Never stop writing them. :)
g8r gal chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
So good.
SDFanFicChic chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
This was truly awesome. I loved it. Now I am going to go read your other stuff.
bklover08 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Wow! This was wonderful and beautiful and so evocative. It made me see the waves and the shore even though I have never been to Hawaii. I really loved that she took her own messages from her experiences to mark with the stars, and loved that he was a star to her and she to him. ;)
idkmuch chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
This was one of my favorites in the contest; I'm glad to know it was written by you.
twificfan chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I absolutely love it! Thank you.
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I don't have the words to describe the fabulousness of this story. Absolutely loved reading it.
justluey chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
It was really good! And, well ... Beautiful !
KLL77 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Such a lovely story.
Songirl chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Anna, you amaze me. You are truly a gifted writer. I love how you channel this casual masculinity into your male characters like the tomboy you are. I took days to read this slowly, savouring the details, the atmosphere, all of the vast spaces and meanings between the things you don't say. This is your sweet spot ( a little Ro like! And that's a compliment.)

Do you care if I say it was hot? Probably not, but i love subtlety and the porn writers and their holes and body fluuds could learn a thing or two... The part about eyeing her belly? Shivers.

I liked the narrative voice-such a casual dude. Have you been to Hawaii? Have you surfed? I was convinced, thoroughly. Thanks for raising the bar as always.

Jaws28 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Cullenfan524 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
AHH! I loved it!
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