|Reviews for The Lone Survivor|
| jewels chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Er... I'm going to second the "you need a beta" comment. You've got a LOT of grammar errors, and your writing style is very simplistic. I also agree that if you're going to write your characters swearing, don't "star" it out or censor it - you've got the rating at "Teen", so it should be okay.
Here's the FFVII timeline for you:
Dirge Of Cerberus
| SoulNinjas chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
damn go yuffie i have never seen her so ticked off before her old friend better watch himself cause she isn't about to very much mercy is she? nice job so far thoughAngel
| live.die.be chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
the F**** is goin' on? Yuffie, how do you know this piece o' s****? "
Don't star out swearing.
You have a lot of little grammar mistakes, I reiterate, you need a beta.
| live.die.be chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Your writing style is stilted and childlike. You need a beta to help you make it smoother.
It's never refered to as the "Advent Children" incedent, but rather the triplets.
Honestly, if you don't even know which came first, DoC, or AC you shouldn't even be writing a story for this fandom with that little knowledge of it.
| Cedric Inuzuka chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Only one question : it is a yuffie cloud romance ? Cause i Will follow only this kind of fic
Thank in advance