|Reviews for Battle Wounds|
| LuffyLover chapter 1 . 4/24
ugh. concussions suck butt. Cuts, scrapes, burns I don't mind, but anything that takes away my ability to move freely (head wounds, sprains, broken bones, etc.) irritates the heck outta me.
| FallingNarwhals chapter 1 . 2/24
Aw, poor Danny.
| madisonurias chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
can you write another one? i loved this one but it was short.
| IvyVine6 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014
This is great. The perfect mix of bonding humor and angst.
| Zammieluver4eves chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
| Peacexfreedom chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
Aww, poor Danny.
Well done fic, though ;)
| Katie chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Amazingly written! It seems like it would take a while for Danny's parents to get used to the fact that he's half-ghost, and that he's been hunting ghosts for over a year before they even knew about it (not to mention the fact that they had threatened to rip him apart more than a few times as well)... I mean, we didn't really get to see much of their reaction in Phantom Planet, since the ending seemed to go by pretty fast. I guess it kinda needed to tie everything up, since it was the last episode and all, but I still wish it would gave gone on longer - there is still so much potential for this show, and I'm one of those teens who was a fan of Danny Phantom as a kid, and is still hoping for it to somehow make a return. Unlikely, I know, but I can still hope :)
Very interesting point of view - I loved reading this story! I really wish there were more fanfics like this out there... Not many people seem to write about the whole adjustment thing that would certainly have needed to happen after Phantom Planet.
You're very talented :)
| DannyPhantomluver2 chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
sequal or another chap plz
| Pheek chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
I really gotta give you props for this fic. The idea is a twist off the mainstream Jack/Maddie finding out by him getting hurt to you having tweaked it into your own original idea of having Jack getting used to it after PP. This truly is a very unique story.
Jack's reaction was very interesting, too. Usually, in a JackxDanny fic, people'll make Jack to smart or too aware, but not this one. It's nice to have a break from the constant Jack Fenton that plagues Fanfiction writers.
On top of the originality and ICness, I also have to point out the lack of grammatical, spelling and punctual errors most fics have. Thank you for being observant of that. Too many writers (one being me) have errors like those that make the story not very appealing. This story was free of those.
Great fic! Nice job not falling into the groove! Loving the Jack and Danny bonding! Any chance at a sequel or continuation?
| Blackwolfhunting chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I've had a bad concussion several times and the way that DAnny is acting is just the way i did. it was bad, one from having someone slam me into the floor during a basketball game and anotehr when i fell off the porch and hit my head on a rock and finally playing tackle football with some friends and got slammed headfirst into a frozen snowbank that was by that time mostly ice, so the reaction that Danny has is real accurate.
i congratualte you.
| Anthora09 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Aww, I really enjoyed this story! I love how you portray their relationship: I think it is one that isn't explored enough. Thanks for sharing :)
| jeanette9a chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
wow sick much?
| bluename chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
To sum it up: I freaking loved it! really nicely wrote, I love bonding fics and this one is definitely superb! good job!
Poor Danny thought, that must hurt!
| kkann chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Oh my goodness I don't even know what to do with you. I love you; I love this. This story RIGHT HERE is fantastic. I love how you put angst and humor together and you made it WORK. Because you are awesome. And I can never thank you enough. I love how ...well, awkward (sorry, I couldn't think of a better word xD) Jack was at different points. Made it more believable.
"When had scraped knees turned into bloody battle wounds?"
I don't know why, but that line really stands out to me-other than the last bit with Danny puking on him, haha. XD
Ahh concussions...never had one of those. Don't plan too. Poor Danny though! But I still love this! C:
But seriously, don't you ever change. This was brilliant and THANK YOUUUU!
| Alma Uzma chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
This was really well-written but I found that your attempt at humor seemed a tad un-feeling on Jack's part. A bit more sympathy would have sufficed.
Keep up the good work though.