|Reviews for Awake|
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
Nice story. Please post a new chapter. Are their power is comparable to 2 class solider?
| Neusuada chapter 8 . 6/12/2012
Please Please update faster.
| The Lord of Insomnia chapter 8 . 6/10/2012
Please write faster, I love this couple and there is no fanfiction for them. PLEASE WRITE FASTER!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/11/2012
That was so good! Please write more soon!
| DeliciouslyDangerous1 chapter 8 . 1/29/2012
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 8 . 9/22/2011
HOW COME MARLENE HASN'T GONE CRAZY FROM HEARING THE VOICE IN HER HEAD YET? ANYWAY ADVENTURE TIME AND ALL THAT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 7 . 9/21/2011
SORRY BEEN BUSY. ANYWAY WHAT KIND OF THINGS ARE GONNA HAPPEN? THERE GONNA BE AN ADVENTURE WITH THE TWO, GOING AGAINST IMPOSSIBLE ODDS, AND MEETING A SLEW OF CHARACTERS WITH THEIR OWN QUERKY PERSONALITY, AND GO AGAINST DIFFERENT THINGS IN THE PROCESS? YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 6 . 9/17/2011
NICE CHAPTER'S, AND I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING I THINK IF I KNOW WHERE THIS IS GOING. YOU MIGHT NOT WANT TO KEEP THE CHAPTERS SO SPLIT UP I MEAN YOU COULD HAVE KEPT THIS LIKE THE WAY IT WAS WITH THREE CHAPTERS. YOU SPLIT IT UP TO MUCH THE WORDS TO CHAPTER RATIO WILL BE TOO SPLIT UP AND I MIGHT MAKE PEOPLE THINK YOU'RE A LAZY WRITER, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| Sujesstive chapter 2 . 9/16/2011
Thank you for the reviews. I was looking for a Denzel/Marlene sequel and couldn't find one so I decided to write one.
I will be posting a a new chapter in the next few days once I've polished it off. Please keep me posted on your thoughts
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 2 . 9/16/2011
OKAY THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN DYING TO READ. A SEQUEL TYPE FIC WITH DENZEL AS THE HERO, PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CONTINUE. YOU'RE THE ONLY PERSON DOING THIS YOU OWN THE MONOPOLY FOR THIS TYPE OF THING GO NUTS, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| sayain673 chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
Very good. I've been waiting for a fic like this since FF VII Advent Children. They make a cute, couple, don't ya think?
Your style of writing seems to flow, but it flows a little too fast. Also, you may want to consider using more detail in your writing.
Characterization is in order and I like how you turned Marlene's personality around. She really does take after her daddy ("YOU SON OF A BITCH!") :-). Denzel's look at things made me laugh, especially that bit with him and Marlene in the changing room.