Reviews for The Wrong Twin
Guest chapter 5 . 5/16
You know, AGUMENTI AND ACCIO are like, third year spells or something, but about two chapters ago you said Harry was mastering 6 and 7 year spells, which, btw, are THE LAST YEARS! So if you said HARRY"S MASTERING 6 AND 7 YEAR SPELLS. HARRYS MASTERING A FEW THIRD YEAR SPELLS. THOSE ARE THE WRONG WAY AROUND, DUDE! Hope you're happy... (btw, those caps up there is your high pitched old lady voice ;) -ninja)

-ninja4evr/SourNinja/just plain ninja.

PS I love ninja's... and sour sweets. I'm gonna get chinese sweets, cuz they're like really sour, yeah? I forgot
Guest chapter 4 . 5/16
Dude, this is made out of ITALICS! Are you okay? Blind? Dude, you need to be UNBLIND! Plz?! Pretty PLZ! Thx TY!
BlackJackBJ chapter 26 . 4/30
Update soon! There is a few grammar mistakes and spelling mistakes first few chapters and so on. But, uncluding that, it's pretty good!
XJackiefrostX chapter 5 . 4/9
Im sorry, you had a good plot but the grammar and the spelling forced me to stop reading at chapter 5:/
Lady Celairiel chapter 4 . 4/8
Nice story. Find a Beta reader and this story will be even more awesome.
ibraha01 chapter 26 . 3/31
good plot despite the really horrible grammar and awful spelling
Silver Blacklupin chapter 26 . 3/16
still the best story I have ever read. ever better than JKR.
XxgirlblunderxX chapter 26 . 3/1
A Month ! Awwww come on :( you left us on a major Cliify and did Dudley die or is he still alive ?
XxgirlblunderxX chapter 5 . 2/28
IM SO CONFUSED ?! Are they in first or second year?
XxgirlblunderxX chapter 2 . 2/27
FU DumbleDork Geeeerrrrr
Guest chapter 26 . 2/24
Please update
percab8531 chapter 4 . 2/20
There are a few spelling mistakes but otherwise this is awesome
chi akume chapter 7 . 2/16
night is misspelled in the last paragraph.
CatWriter chapter 4 . 2/3
biob1 chapter 9 . 1/30
Why didn't he just use wandless magic?
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