Reviews for The Wrong Twin
Child of Dreams chapter 2 . 2/3
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 2/3
Roostertheking chapter 26 . 1/21
Harry forgave just like that...I can't believe it and thus fic was suppose to be raven claw harry...and for this untrustworthy friends he us staying in Hogwarts..its getting really stupid... Thank god u ended it here...
Roostertheking chapter 23 . 1/21
U have copied the idea from somewhere... This chapter contains information which r not connected with the story..
- Malfoy was arrested already but here u say minster came with his lapdog malfoy.
- when did harry found he can speak in parsel tongue?
- you said in past chapter lilly lost her ability to have more babies after danny cursed her but in this chapter she is gone for delivery..
-Petunia didn't know she was pregnant only in last chapter but now she has a daughter and harry is not existed to meet her if it was the first time he met her..
-Sirius already gave harry twoway mirror in last chapters but here he is giving the mirror again..
-you separated Harry's friends for pity reason like being bullied...
-and then finally when whole school is against him and he is just hairline away from azkaban..harry jumped into a tunnel from a well protected jail guarded by teachers... after a snake blindly like a Griff and started fighting like a trained dueller...the boy who was not able to protect himself from bullys...
I bet next he will be arrested for setting the snake in school and Daniel will become saviour again ...
Why harry came to Hogwarts ? How Igor became friends with Petunia?
Your fic started good but started to become stale wonder u left it incomplete...
hary pother fun chapter 27 . 1/18
When is new chapter going to be
PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 27 . 1/17
Its past my October were is the new chap ¿ and plz update sssssssssssoon luved it
MK100 chapter 27 . 1/3
And... where is it
you havent done chapter 27 . 12/11/2017
MissiYoung chapter 12 . 11/20/2017
I love the premise of this fic. The story line and plot are amazing. Unfortunately your command of the English language is so bad that I have to stop here; reading to this point has literally given me a headache. I would have loved to see where this went, because it showed so much promise, but it honestly is so badly written that I can't enjoy it. I had hope, for awhile, that it may get better. Then I read your Author's Note telling everyone who gave constructive criticism regarding your spelling/grammar to 'get a life'; that's when I knew that there was no hope for the quality of your work to improve. I've tried to persevere but now I must surrender. I found this fic on the favorites list of an author whose work I love, and it's got me reconsidering their work, as well.
Amanda Drew chapter 27 . 11/10/2017
I really like it hope you add more
Guest chapter 27 . 11/8/2017
Plz post next chapter
Mark the Mark chapter 27 . 11/7/2017
7 days later... 3
Rupinder chapter 27 . 11/1/2017
I actually finished this story on the 28th of August and I loved the story because of the suspense and enjoyed the fanfiction. Just asking is the fanfiction releasing a few days after
Gambito chapter 27 . 11/1/2017
This is an amazing story, I thoroughly enjoyed it so far.
Sunshine-Midnight123 chapter 1 . 9/1/2017
I like this but please consider acquiring a beta (a fellow author who edits for you). It was hard to read through this and as such I unfortunately have to pass on continuing to read this but don't let that discourage you! You've got some pretty cool ideas!
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