|Reviews for Pie & Pegasi|
| VulpineSnow chapter 5 . 2/23/2013
... *tilts head* ... I don't get a lick of it.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2013
| CamperfangII chapter 5 . 1/3/2013
omg this is great i got that shock when somthing exiting happens and that awkward feeling in shock for the awkward parts of this story thisis a great story /)'3'(\!
| Jaida chapter 5 . 11/18/2012
Wheres chapter 6
| Shadow Room of Souls chapter 5 . 9/5/2012
Update! This is AWESOME!
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2012
Dafaq did I just read?
| Rowanoak23 chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
BWahahaha! This story is awesome! Soarin' is such an adorable doofus! I loved Luna "Everyone's looking at meeeeeee!" Every chapter has made me laugh, its hilarious!
| Zervziel chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
This chapter confused me...in many ways. Oh well. Fry eating contest!
| Slivas chapter 5 . 6/13/2012
This is very good. I just hope it ain't dead. That would suck.
| Tenguman2.exe chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
Just finished chapter one. Always thought this would make a good pairing, looking forward to the rest.
| Amber Treelights chapter 5 . 5/23/2012
First of all, let me apologize for taking so long to read this, and Night (which I'm going to read next). If I'm not doing other things, I just keep forgetting. ): Which is a shame because nobody writes like you can.
This chapter was a delightful addition to the story, and it's nice to see Spitfire well again. As usual, Soarin's such a perfect mix of adorable ridiculousness. It's cute to see him worrying about other mares being huge competition simply because Spitty is bi, and the dramatic irony of it was hilarious.
Honestly, though, I think my favorite thing about this chapter was Rainbow Dash. I loved how you portrayed her, from her adorable clinging to Spitfire, to her willingness to out-food Soarin, even though she has no idea what "stuff" he's talking about. You balanced her cuteness & spastic-ness very well, and even managed to put in hints of her being laid-back at the same time. I really enjoyed reading her, and her interactions with Soarin & Spitfire.
Also - "Before him stood Spitfire, looking very much embarrassed, with a curious-looking Rainbow Dash pressed tightly to her side." - That's one of the cutest images I've ever gotten in my mind.
Your writing is lovely, as always. The way you broke Soarin's daydream mid-sentence whenever Spitfire tried to speak to him was really well done, and also something I can't say I've seen before in writing. Really cleverly written. In general, the description, style, and imagery was wonderful.
Really enjoyed reading this silly little chapter, and I can't wait for the next ones.
| Reis Northwin chapter 5 . 5/17/2012
Really enjoy this story, cuz I'm on par with soarin's 'soarin-ness'. Seems to me somepony likes blazblue?
| uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu chapter 5 . 5/8/2012
I luaghed so many times in this chapter... Totally worth the wait.
| Blu Mist the Potato chapter 5 . 5/8/2012
"COMPETITION ALERT. ALL SOARINS TO BATTLE STATIONS!"
I'm sending you the hospital bill for my broken ribs...
| lord faggot of gay chapter 5 . 5/8/2012
Life and other shit? *cough* Mass Effect*cough. Pretty funny chapter from a pretty funny author. A lot of funny lines. I will outlast you in not updating stories