Reviews for A Piece of Cake
K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
I would never have guessed you were only 13 if you hadn't mentioned it; this is better than the work of a lot of adults on the site! Really well written: I loved Ms. Reed and that Sam wants to do this for his brother and that John was a real dad in this. My one bit of advice is it would have been good to know how old the guys were in this; maybe you could have worked in Dean's age when you mentioned his birthday. But other than that, really good job!
avidreader33 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Great Job!
el spirito chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Cute, kid! Certainly not bad for a 13 year old, huh? Keep it up and you'll only get better from here. :)
VG Jekyll chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
Cute story. _ Made me feel warm and fuzzy inside.