Reviews for Sex Machine
garddita17 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
One of the most original story ideas I have read. And I really liked it. I was worried for Masen, so glad Edward and Bella kept him around for their pleasure. ;)
IccaSpriggs chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I enjoyed this and I'm so glad that the story ended this way.I kinda wanted this type of ending.

I'm so happy that Bella has the real Edward back in her life.

Thanks for sharing.
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I'm glad they kept Masen around. He was such a sweetheart. That would be pretty messed up to see your likeness everywhere in the form of sextoys. He must have really loved her to be so forgiving.
rubybeachdragnfly chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
very nice! :D:D:D
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
In the spirit of sci-fi fic, I loved it. Imagine being able to order a cloned Edward...pre-programmed. Lovely.
XvenominmybloodX chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
WANT. What a genius idea! Loved it!
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
I want a masen too!

I adore your story.
heygirl18 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
What a hot glimpse at the future ;)

Loved the O/S - thanks for writing and sharing! xx
nmydreamz chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
oh, my, God. Where can I order mine? Great o/s, who wouldn't want to have one of these at home? Very imaginative, i loved it. Expandable, no?

xox
sballLuvr5 chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
loved it! :)

Kristi
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
what a unique idea for a oneshot (and boy what I wouldnt give for a Masen of my own lol). Great story hun :)
SnowyHedwig chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Great job, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Masen was a much better sex bot than Spike's Buffy was, I must say! The happy threesome was a creative touch, no one left unhappy. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Angela LuvsFanfic chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
Fuck SoapyMayhem thats was HAWT.. My ultimate fantasy two Edwards.. Im away for a cold shower lol lots of love Angela xxx
MommaAbby chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Damn...my poor, poor husband is not going to know what hits him when I jump him after reading this O/S girl! I bow down to worship the altar of your smutty genius! This goes on my top 10!
JenJadeEyes chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
NERD ON, woman, NERD ON!

Okay, you don't get much sci-fi in the Twilight fandom, so this is an utter and complete surprise! And such a nice reveal about Bella creating Masen to replace Edward - for a while there, I thought you were going to go with the canon vamp New Moon abandonment story - but then I couldn't work that out with her working for Whitlock... and Masen's obvious joy an sense of humor... *grin* And the fact that she got his DNA, but couldn't change it enough once the Whitlock folks found out about it... priceless! [did none of them recognize the son of a major player in their field of business? *evil grin* or did they just not care?]

And cougar Rosalie! GO GIRL! Or should I feel sorry for Emmett, being tossed on the dungheap of family business... *grin* I imagine her schooling him, and him being very happy about it... *grin*.

And a JANEbot? That one surprised me. But the Mike one didn't at all;.. funny, that...

Oh, and scantily clad Masens with an independently vibrating cock, and the ability to sample the merchandise in the back room? Did my invite get lost in the mail? *grin* You know, from however many years in the future?

Hilarious snort-tastic line: "I don't think he likes me very much. I bet it's because I look better than him."

And. of course, your "double the Edward, double the fun" bit at the end - spectacular. Would love to be a fly on the wall... okay, really, girl on the chair watching and waiting for my turn, but that's not how the saying goes...

Much love!

JenJadeEyes
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