Reviews for New Girl in Mystic Falls
Trance20666 chapter 1 . 5/27/2014
a good intro
you going to follow the first season?
obviously it's going to be slightly different with an OC being a Main character
i'm not sure who her pairing will be
or if she is even going to have one in the first story
but maybe Damon?
though that will cause problems once Elena start fallen for him.
is her friend that knows about the tomb Anna?
and does Chelsea know she's a vampire?
is she going to stay human?
maybe someone is going to turn her.
or she could already be some kind of supernatural,
she just doesn't know it yet?
Trance
Katie Garrett chapter 8 . 12/30/2013
Awesome
ThePhantomismyLove chapter 8 . 11/18/2013
awesome
Aiphira chapter 8 . 8/29/2013
You just .. ended it with that? And the sequel is one year later? God .. Can't you, like, write how she coped with her life as a vampire? How she met Klaus/why is she with her?
aleksjoly chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
i loved this chapter! i think she bump into stefan or elena.
aleksjoly chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
i like the beginning!
Caliwaves18x chapter 8 . 7/1/2013
I really liked this story! Thankfully I saw u made a sequel... I wish this had more reviews so I could I've found it more quickly :( I think that if u edited the first 4-5 chapters that u could really continue it into season one bc after ch 6 it really started to pick up w the storyline. Awesome job ! 3
ChibiCheshire chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
OMG! YuGiOh Abridged! Thank you for being awesome! Love the story!
eam's chapter 7 . 7/19/2012
pls make another scene
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
i just wanna say"please don't end the story coz in really find it interesting...
and i can say you are a nice writer just keep it up...
i'm just 1st yr in high school and at the summer time i tried to do my beast to make a nice story...

here's a tip: just focus in the chapter your writing coz; maybe the reader will be confuse.

From: Eam's
Guest chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
its nice... but i really can't understand the next scene to this sentence "the next thing i know everything went black"
eam's chapter 6 . 6/27/2012
i want to know what is the relation ship of ana to chealsa; and if what is she...
eam's chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
this chapter is the one i like it so much.. iw ant to know what will happen to chealsa and; what will happen to damon
eam's chapter 4 . 6/27/2012
i like it. and i think it is really thrilling...
ReinaKitty chapter 8 . 10/27/2011
It was pretty good!

I'm kind of sad that you're rushing through it all though :\

It feels like you'll be leaving a lot of things out since you're rushing :\ Just remember, you shouldn't stop writing just because you don't get reviews, write because you want to :)

Oh! Here's a tip, season one took place in 2009, season two in 2010 and season 3 in 2011 :)
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