Reviews for Sealed Legacy
Guest chapter 26 . 11/9/2020
I thought that I said naruto's would be moving into his father's estate after the first part of the exam
Guest chapter 19 . 11/8/2020
Sasuke is really becoming a PEST, why not just kill him already? Nobody would miss him!(well maybe sakura and ino but they'll get over it).
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7/2020
Also that whole "forgiving the the third" was UTTER GARBAGE... So naruto likes hinata and her clan? That's like 1% of the village... Why would he forgive them all arbitrarily? It doesn't make sense.. And the whole speech about naruto's clan? WHY WOULD IT BE HIDDEN? (everyone that's of any age to Be ABLE/WANT to hurt naruto ALREADY KNOWS!) It's POINTLESS AND STUPID!
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7/2020
Why even ask that? YOUR OBVIOUSLY going for canon, so naruto will "adapt", and everything will be if not EXACTLY like canon (then pretty close), my question is WHY?!

None of the teams make any sense.. The ino-shika-cho? The people of the world have an ENTIRE GENERATION to develop ways to beat them and they haven't learned anything NEW. Also you have two "support staff" and only one fighter (who hates to fight)

Gai's team is sad.. A taijutsu fighter with two OTHER taijutsu fighters and support.. NO long-range, no ninjutsu, no medical jutsu... It's a "combat wombat".. and SCREWED if they come across a ninjutsu user (like say, ANY OF THE AKUSTSKI!)

Team 8.. a Tracking team... (with a genjutsu mistress that has NOTHING to do with tracking and two of her students, she can't teach or use on!)... SO WHAT? They can't do anything if they tracked the opponent? You got ONE fighter on the team, and he isn't very good...Also it takes a nose, eyes AND shino's bugs to track? THAT"S KINDA PATHETIC.

EVERY TEAM SUCKS BALLS... There is no "equaling skills to match"... It's a NIGHTMARE.. It's a CLUSTER FUCK! If you had a brain in your skull, naruto and sasuke should NEVER be put on the same team! They are both "front line fighters", while naruto has stamina, sasuke has technique... They are also both ninjutsu users... sasuke has his family archive.. NARUTO never runs out of chakra and can SPAM S-RANK jutsu all day. You also don't put an uchiha with a other doujutsu user... This screams "KIDNAP ME" to other villages and it's just DUMB. Seriously. I thought the people of konoha were dumb, but "authors" really need to take it up a notch.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/7/2020
This makes no sense to me... Why re-create team suicide?... It's stupid... They already know naruto doesn't get along with sasuke (EVERYONE KNOWS IT)... So how would you make a team with two people actively PLOTTING the other's demise? THAT"S IMBECILIC...Naruto is also basicaly a NUCLEAR BOMB(that the villagers have hit with hammers for a DECADE)... (and hiruzin is SUPPOSED to be trying to "make it up to him".. HOW DOES ANY OF THIS equal team suicide?)... It's IDIOTIC... Here is a thought.. how about team naruto with the girl that KEEPS him from homicidal urges?... Sounds slightly more intelligent to me! Put sasUKE with kiba (he's a lot like naruto) and sakura (or pull out AMI or someone that is a "red-shirt"
SuperSonic2654 chapter 17 . 11/6/2020
Uh...hate to break it to ya but Sasuke doesn’t like anything sweet
Guest chapter 11 . 11/6/2020
Why would they be willing to work together? Naruto SHOULD hate just about EVERYBODY IN THE VILLAGE (and it's warranted... he's NOT a "saint")... Sasuke has an ego that won't fit in the hokage mountain! AND his family was killed on orders by konoha.. (he doesn't know, but the clues are there)... This is NITRO and GLYCERINE put together (and not in a good way)... It's a STUPID combo... I don't even see the POINT of team 7 after naruto told the hokage he ALMOST became a "self-fulfilling prophecy"... and that there ARE NO MORE UZUMAKIS! Meaning THEY CAN'T SEAL kyuubi again! It WOULD DESTROY THEM ALL! Hands-down.

Put him on the team with the girl that keeps his HATE in check, and make sure he and the BITCHUHIHA never cross paths again!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/6/2020
Why do people keep offering WORDS to sasuke? He's took stupid for them to work.. JUST KILL HIM and be done with it... OR beat him to TAR and let him live, knowing it's "DONE"! I agree with shika, this whole line is STUPID (sasuke is QUEER! Straight as a CIRCLE!) and to be quite honest, it's getting BORING and repetitive! Heck have hinata NEUTER him... (better yet, geld him.. as in he'll never even have a hard-on anymore EVER)...
Guest chapter 9 . 11/6/2020
Who would have made the connection? How about ANYBODY with a brain in their skull and eyes in their HEADS!? EVERYBODY should have made the connection by now, it's completely and UTTERLY stupid (and unrealistic) that they haven't! Not only that, but naruto's comment on going on missions and everyone finding out about him, was the truth! ALL YOU HAD HIRUZEN take away from it, was "going from c to s rank missions"... Which was COMPLETELY NOT THE POINT! (see? shows his COMPLETE INEPTITUDE yet again!)

Does ANYBODY care what happens to poor prissy sasUKE? NOPE! Let him go "die in a ditch" somewhere, nobody gives a toss!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/6/2020
Your reasoning for naruto acting like that is FAULTY... He'd have to actually act like that FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFE (which means he shouldn't even have a "real" personality, because it's unnecessary) .. Ninja are deceptive?.. NONE of the other shinobi are deceptive.. In fact NOBODY in all of konoha is worth a CRAP at keeping a secret! And people would try to find plans to "handle him"... Guess what? THEY ALREADY ARE! It doesn't lessen peoples' dislike of him, in fact if ANYTHING, it just HEIGHTENS IT! So you see... Your very precept is FLAWED!

"armed with this knowledge"? ARMED? Really because naruto doesn't seem to be doing jack-CRAP with any knowledge he gets! He's like the third and the rest of the village really, FULLY OF HOPES AND DREAMS, but all de does is WISH, never ACT! "Wishes" don't DO anything! You want something to change? YOU FORCE IT INTO REALITY! Forgiving the hokage, just like that? No, his trust and respect for the hokage should be GONE permanently... Also minato wanted his son seen as a hero.. Yes... HIS SON being the operative words here... Revealing HALF of it, was INCREDIBLY STUPID!.(especially since hirzun himself said that kushina and mito's status was hidden!).. Respect for his position as hokage? He already SCREWED the POOCH with that one.. By setting it up so naruto would become a self-fulfilling prophecy! He's not worthy of respect as a leader, a hokage or EVEN a man! He's a imbecilic COWARD!
Guest chapter 8 . 11/5/2020
Your reasoning for naruto acting like that is FAULTY... He'd have to actually act like that FOR THE REST OF HIS LIFE (which means he shouldn't even have a "real" personality, because it's unnecessary) .. Ninja are deceptive?.. NONE of the other shinobi are deceptive.. In fact NOBODY in all of konoha is worth a CRAP at keeping a secret! And people would try to find plans to "handle him"... Guess what? THEY ALREADY ARE! It doesn't lessen peoples' dislike of him, in fact if ANYTHING, it just HEIGHTENS IT! So you see... Your very precept is FLAWED!

"armed with this knowledge"? ARMED? Really because naruto doesn't seem to be doing jack-CRAP with any knowledge he gets! He's like the third and the rest of the village really, FULLY OF HOPES AND DREAMS, but all de does is WISH, never ACT! "Wishes" don't DO anything! You want something to change? YOU FORCE IT INTO REALITY!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/5/2020
The whole "protecting you from minato's enemies" ALSO doesn't fly.. It had an extremely SHORT "shelf-life".. It lasted until the SECOND he became a genin... THEN it's a very STUPID excuse (and all it is at this point IS an excuse) If he wanted naruto protected then he should have NEVER let him become a ninja (or leave the village).. The moment he DID? The clock started ticking... (it was a dumb plan from the jump)
Guest chapter 7 . 11/5/2020
Why not just put naruto on a team with hinata and sakura? That seems the most LOGICAL.. Sakura is there as the motivation, (considering she's actively HOSTILE to naruto at the jump) and hinata is there as the incentive to keep them all "safe".. Basically "stick and carrot" Also it makes a HECK OF A LOT MORE logical sense then to pair him up with someone he actively WANTS (and is able) to kill.. that just ends badly.. OR ends with sasuke defecting (which is WHAT HAPPENED)... It's KINDA EASY to see these things, if you have even two working NEURONS to rub together.

Kishi made a VERY unrealistic view for a hero.. Heck he made BRIGHTBURN before it was even created... The main things the hokage SHOULD be concerned with are: 1. Naruto HAS to make connections (he has to see the people as WORTHY of being protected).. 2... He has to "fix" all the damage he's PERSONALLY done to the line before the clan heads and the diyamo figure out how BADLY he screwed up... 3.. He's gotta somehow convince naruto that not all konoha NEEDS to die (because he's the jinchuriki and can basically eradicate them if he just "gives up")...

I never understood the concentrated EFFORT that it would take to make naruto a pariah, (the fact that it ALL happens OFF screen and before the first episode kinda proves my point) to dumb down the academy, to turn EVERYONE against him, to keep him out of shops and to turn the clan heads against him? THAT IS A CRAP-LOAD of work.. and FOR WHAT? To make their biggest weapon, their greatest threat? THAT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE AT ALL! It's all pretty piss-poor storytelling. The village comes off looking like imbeciles,(dumbed down academy), the village comes of looking like they are COMPLETELY incompetent (to all other villages) and EXTREMELY WEAK (again to all other villages that SEE who he is).
Guest chapter 7 . 11/5/2020
The mizuki thing is just retarded at this point isn't it?
Guest chapter 6 . 11/5/2020
Look at the DEFINATION of "ninja" on the web and it's WOEFULLY non-existent here... a "spymaster" among ninja?.. That's REDUNDANT... They are ALL SUPPOSED to be good at "covert"... But in this series NONE of them are ANY good at it! Quite literally, they are SUPPOSED to be good at "secrets" and this entire series is based on them NOT being good at them... They are more "samurai" then ninja. "honor of the village"? WHAT HONOR.. Ninja didn't CARE about that.
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