|Reviews for Goodbye Father|
| Amazon Star chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
| Irving-Braxiatel chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
Aww! Loved this!
| ink-stained dreams chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I love the intensity you've imbued in this piece. The verbs and descriptions do a nive job of creating a wonderfully tense atmosphere. :) I feel like you got Andromeda's emotions spot-on. I'm also very fond of the last line and the double meaning in the final phrase. All in all, a lovely piece!
| AsterLea chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
Nice job! Andromeda's motives make perfect sense- you described her reasoning without overdoing it, and her stupefying her father did not come as a shock to me. It was really sweet that she told him goodbye anyway )
The only suggestion I have is in the paragraph that starts "Andromeda swallowed." Shouldn't it be "what could she say" instead of "did?" I know, nitpicking, but it threw me for a loop. Grammar and spelling are perfectly fine otherwise.
You bring to life a very pivotal moment in the Black family history, and you do it very well! Thank you for taking my challenge!
| obsessivegirl73 chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
That was great, awesome job! XD