Reviews for The Will of Hell
Guest chapter 12 . 11/12/2013
Loved it
sylvia1984 chapter 11 . 10/27/2013
you made me cry AHHHHHH
poor Shiro
love the story
sylvia1984 chapter 12 . 10/27/2013
OMG that was so good
can't wait for the next chapter
TrustyFoxy chapter 12 . 10/23/2013
nice ending, can you make the chapters now? Its been years
TrustyFoxy chapter 11 . 10/23/2013
Very nice, it was a bit rushed though.
Heartfang chapter 12 . 8/21/2013
Wow, just...wow. It is even more awesome reading this a second time through.

I have noticed a few errors in the other chapters though. Some words were misspelled/typos. The one that I can remember the most at the moment is 'abthroom' and others that had similar switched letters. I honestly think they were just typos. I can't remember which chapters I read these from but can you watch out for that in your next chapters? It does turn heads though or in my case makes me read the same line two to three times trying to figure what it was that didn't make sense in the sentence I just read at the time.

I humbly await for an update my fellow good writer.
hi chapter 12 . 6/28/2013
I loved it! MORE!
kittywitchy chapter 12 . 4/23/2013
Update! Update! UPDATE! I know it's demanding but please?
EpikalStorms chapter 12 . 4/7/2013
*deep breath* Oooo, can't wait! What happens next?!
MidnightEden234 chapter 12 . 2/3/2013
Plleeeeeaaaaasse finish! ...and make it a happy ending? :)
MidnightEden234 chapter 10 . 2/3/2013
"You do realize how much of a yaoi fan I am, right?"
"A what?"
"N-never mind! forget I said that...ok?" she chuckled nervously.
YES RUKIA! JUST YES!
MidnightEden234 chapter 8 . 2/3/2013
I NEARLY CRIED IN THIS CHAPTER! OMG!
I. HATE. SHUREN.
GAH!
MidnightEden234 chapter 7 . 2/3/2013
Very soon, I'll have his body...
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!? :O
MidnightEden234 chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
*drools* I've been hooked
MidnightEden234 chapter 2 . 2/3/2013
shrugeed... might wanna fix that. xD
Nice story, btw. :) I loved the Hell Chapter!
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