Reviews for Undercover Phantom
Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya chapter 1 . 1/28
One mistake in the summary.
Three mistakes in the first paragraph.
TEN in the second paragraph.
Three in the third.

That's an average of 1.7 grammatical mistakes per sentence. Most are missing commas and tense agreement, but a couple times you have a "sentence" fragment that is just a mess of adjectives and doesn't actually say anything.

The result, this is unreadable. It takes too much effort to decode what you intend to write to be worth it to read.
Mewsali chapter 33 . 5/7/2015
Danny's head would go through the wall.
Mewsali chapter 27 . 5/7/2015
You made Danny loopy like a fruit loop.
Adren: I found a stick!
That is a sword.
Cheese: I found a sword!
That is a stick. I should really think about separating you two.
Brittany Bauer chapter 41 . 5/6/2014
This was actually really good. I did not expect the outcomes to be the way they were. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happened next. Nice job. _
Monkeygirlz3 chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
Oh this is not going to end well for them!
jeanette9a chapter 41 . 1/20/2013
bravo for a good story! XD
HalfafanD chapter 41 . 6/21/2012
Sorry I'm not logged on. Loved the story; longest I ever read. :)
Zii Raevyn chapter 39 . 10/25/2011
First, please dont report me i actually ha e something important 2 say

Alright so calling Danny's duplicates clones, implies that if he, (the main Danny) died they would continue on living... Like Danielle/Dani, a seperate being

Clones are GENETIC COPYS not apart of the original an individual creature

Hope that helps, ZR
mist shadow chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
he's more frayed and frazzled that he lets on. poor kid
mist shadow chapter 4 . 10/23/2011
a bit hectic and hard to follow, especially if one doesn't know White Collar, still, will keep reading
mist shadow chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
oh boy, this just gets more and more complicated, isn't it?
mist shadow chapter 2 . 10/23/2011
you know, he might have listened to one too many psychological rants of his sister. or maybe, he finally learned to tell something without actually giving away anything
mist shadow chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
what happened to Danny? usually whatever happens, he bounces right back with the help of Jazz, Sam and Tucker. this might be very serious

Neal truly has many enemies
Poppy Marina chapter 16 . 10/20/2011
I don't get it. In one of the chapters Jack says "when Danny comes home..." blah blah blah... He said it like he was so sure Danny was going to come home and now he's pissed and mad at Danny? It doesn't seem like the type of thing Jack would do.
AwesomeAndy chapter 36 . 10/18/2011
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