Reviews for Anna Karenina:Retold
Laura Schiller chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
There is an Anna Karenina category now. You're welcome to post your story there.
jvdm.thecupcakeishere chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
interesting, but there is room for improvement.
1. try not to use too many contractions. the language is slang and frowned upon in good english grammar.
2. use complex shows not only your talent as a writer but it also encourages the reader to think.
3. lenghthen your story. what will happen to anna? will vronsky follow her? you kind of leave the reader hanging, and while suspense is good, it does not fit
well in a story like this.
overall, 4 out of 5 stars. keep up the good work!
TheMotionlessMermaid chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
please update