Reviews for Out From the Rubble
Alice Gone Madd chapter 32 . 1/23/2014
Guest chapter 9 . 2/1/2013
Whats happening!? You should be encouraged your story is going some were, scenery, feeling, depth tell me how they feel, let me feel the closeness and despair of Sam and Prime a bit more, no criticism I want to know your story to feel what you feel:). Your writing well and it makes sense and obviously has a vision keep it up!
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
Ooohhh...this sounds interesting...nicely introduced.
darkpoisonivy chapter 34 . 11/6/2012
Name: Ivy Hwang
Nicknames: Poison Ivy
Sex/Gender Identity: Female
Age: 27 years old
Alliance: Autobot / Human
Job: Researcher / Archer / Sniper
Height: 5ft 4 inches Tall
Weight: 117 lbs

Personality: She has her moments of being a cocky, bitchy person (With her friends) but very kind-hearted as she will help with no hesitation. Her mood swings can flip like a switch. From happily smiling to foul mood all over the place. Has the tendency to apologise a lot and humble. She's an empathy, a good observer, and has a 6th sense on telling whether the person is lying or not. She sometimes can be too serious and can be too relax.

Appearance: Fair skin, Asian looking with Black Brown with Dark Red Tip Mid Back Length Hair, usually tie in a pony tail. Has Dark Brown Eyes and a cognitive mind. Have few faded scars on her arms due to being a victim of a bully.

Preferred Vehicle: 2011 Porsche 991 - Metallic Grey.

Preferred Weapons: Black Recurve Bow (KAP Evolution II) with Aluminium Carbon Arrows, Hoyt Compound Bow Spyder Turbo RKT (Dark Metallic Green), IMI Desert Eagle, AUG and Maverick M4A1 Carbine

Abilities: She has pyrokinesis control ability from her mother side. Observant and Empathy. Has sixth sense on whether a person is lying.

Strengths: Multilingual (Mandarin, Malay and English), has good flexibility and a dancer.

Weaknesses: Has a short fuse temper, annoyed with officials and tend to obey the rules & regulations too much.

Mom: Kim Hwang - 52 years old,
Father: Leo Hwang - 56 years old

History: Originally from a third world country but migrated to US when she was 15 years old. After 4 years in college and 2 years in Graduate school, she works as a Assistant Researcher in the univerisity as intern for 2 years. She works with her mum who's a pharmacist in a private hospital presently. After a few months, a letter was offered to her to be enlisted as a researcher in the military. She has no idea what has install for her.
IronHidescannonlover chapter 34 . 11/6/2012
My character's name is Gage Swazi. She's 19 years old and her birthday is May 20th, 1993. She has a deep red hair color. Not as reed as blood. Only a couple shades lighter. She's 5 foot 3 inches tall. A light tan because she lives in Minnesota. She has Golden Amber eyes. Slim frame but curvey in the right places. She wears skater shoes, Aviators, Tank tops and bootcut pants unless it's really hot, then shorts. She has a scar on her left arm from the middle of her lower arm to just below her wrist from a self defence injury from her real dad as she tried to help her little brother escape from the house. She works on cars of anykind. Preferably trucks. She's had a rough childhood because of her parents abuse but she was adopted my her aunt and Uncle who treats her like a slave to clean the house. She's a sweet girl unless someone tries to steal her pizza or someone messes with her friends then she goes awol on them. Literally. She's sweet but mean when needs be. She likes pulling pranks on people to make others laugh, even if she gets hurt doing so. Loves to freak people out as well. (My fav bots are Optimus, Hide and Sides. If you choose to pair them up. Preferably one of the first two, but what ever you choose is and probably will be great! :) )
Zeng Xiao Long Sunstar Crystal chapter 34 . 11/6/2012
Here is my own Character (read Nightmares and Monsters for a good idea of how she is) and hope you like her.

Name: Captain Caliene Meredith
Nicknames: Cali
Sex/Gender Identity: Female
Age: 29 years old
Alliance: Autobot / Human
Job: Sniper / Saboteur / Translator
Height: 5ft 11 inches Tall
Weight: 138 lbs.

Personality: She has a warped sense of humor but she can be serious when the time calls for it (she may be a blonde - but she ain‘t a stupid ditzy blonde.) She will protect her squad and her friends with her own life should the need arise, and has proven so with her squad and Captain William Lennox when they encountered a group of Insurgents trying to take out a nearby Army Base in Afghanistan in 2002.

Appearance: Tanned Skin from working out in the sun all day. Mid-back length Ash Blonde Hair, usually braided and tied up out of the way. Has Grey expressive eyes that turn silver when angry. Rose Tattoo on left shoulder blade and a curled up Dragon on her lower back with the words ‘Protector’ underneath in Gaelic.

Preferred Vehicle: 2010 Dodge Viper SRT - Metallic Blue with dual white racing stripes.

Preferred Weapons: M242 (Although she is Proficient with: M-24 7.62mm SWS (preferred weapon), The Barrett M82A1, USAS-12, Fabrique National P90, M9 9mm pistol, Fabrique National Five-Seven pistol, MP-5, M249 ((minimi para)).)

Abilities: Can Translate anything that is in the following languages: English (main), Mandarin, Spanish, Arabic, French, Italian, and a small amount of Gaelic (from her mothers side of the family.)

Accurate with most weapons, and good with most languages.
When she makes a friend it is for life.

Weaknesses: Has a short fuse temper, and doesn’t suffer idiots or Annoying Govt. Officials that have no clue what NEST is for.

Mom: Kathleen Meredith - 52 years old,
Father: Richard Meredith - 53 years old,
Brothers: George and Michael - Twins - 21 years old,
Cousin: Miles Stracchino - 19 years old,

History: Enlisted in the Military after High School in 1998 with Distinctions in Science, Languages, Math, and Physical Education. She then worked her way through online college courses throughout her first three years of Military training.

She is one of a handful (literally) of Translators working for NEST.

She previously worked alongside Lennox’s Squad in 2002 in Afghanistan when she helped take out a group of insurgents that were attacking an Army Base.

Was due to be discharged from the Military in 2008 but decided to re-up for another 15 years.

Additional information: Owns property in New Jersey: Currently under renovations to turn the old Farm into a get-a-way for the NEST personnel along with a large grass landing strip, Helo-pad for Helicopters, Large Pond for warm weather swimming, and Munitions storage along with an Urban Warfare Range for testing out new situations in.

Custom title: “A Trigger-happy Translator who loves to blow shit up!”

Enjoy ShayShayCoolAy
darkpoisonivy chapter 33 . 10/30/2012
Hmm, the growth between her and Mirage. :)
And also the raging evil of backstory of her sister's involvement with M.E.C.H
Bee4ever chapter 33 . 10/30/2012
Whoa! Nice ending! You have GOT to have a sequel. Please! I'll give u cyber cookies! *holds out plate* I just gotta know if Mirage is ok, and who her sister's master is!
SJSGirl chapter 33 . 10/30/2012
Aww hate to see it end but it was a good place. If you do a sequel I'd like to see her relationship with Mirage bloom...possibly tie up loose ends on the sister angle
Sigyn chapter 19 . 10/16/2012
Yes I like the story so far, Carolyn is someone I would want to be friends with, And she should be paired up with no one else but Mirage.
Bee4ever chapter 32 . 10/14/2012
Poor Mirage! Wonder if Caroline realises that she loves him yet?
darkpoisonivy chapter 32 . 10/14/2012
Nice chappie! Update soon! 3
Incognito Llama chapter 32 . 10/14/2012
XD Bah, dah, dah, dah, dahhhhhh I'M LOVIN' IT! Oh wow I havn't read a story like this in a while! Keep up the good work!
SJSGirl chapter 32 . 10/14/2012
Poor Mirage ( I do hope he makes it!
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