|Reviews for Body Language|
| Guest chapter 30 . 3/25
Loved this chapter and the whole story. Can't wait to read the next one. Continue with your great writing
| Guest chapter 30 . 3/25
Love it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
| jopolniaczek chapter 30 . 3/6
"I had no idea who this Mary Jane was, but I was hoping she could take Tumpy's mind off Blair." Oh Molly you innocent little bean
"Besides, I didn't want her to know that I'd been pulling a Tootie and snooping on her." Girl has been pulling a Tootie this entire story lmao at this point Tootie would be pulling a Molly
Dude, idk what you've been up to in all this time but it seems to me like your writing has improved. There's a smoother flow to things this chapter. Your characters' rationalizations made more sense too. Blair realizing she didn't want Steve OR Tumpy at the party was perfect and I kinda hope she continues to prioritize herself like she did there. Tumpy is too possessive. The Nancy stuff was very Lord of the Flies-meets-Carrie but even then you had Mrs. Garrett playing the angry voice of reason about it and Molly knowing what they did was brutal. Plus that The New Girl Part 2 dialogue fit like a glove.
| DaSpinArtist chapter 1 . 8/1/2016
I enjoy this story like none other. I strangely (?) love the angst and tension going on amongst the girls. I can't wait to see how they all overcome Nancy's and those homophobes' actions. Please update soon!
| jopolniaczek chapter 28 . 7/24/2016
I like the narrative style of this chapter. The hindsight perspective got a little confusing when there were flashbacks within flashbacks (I think? lol) but I personally love the "if we only knew then what we know now" approach for building suspense. Reminds me of a couple of novels I've read, and I've been entertaining the idea of writing one in a similar style (like, hypothetically, if I had the time to write another fic after I finished my current one). I'm surprised Mr. Bradley hasn't gotten involved yet considering they went after a teacher. Even as dim as he is, I'd expect him to hear about it and make an ineffective attempt at intervention or something.
| crystalchandelier29 chapter 28 . 7/23/2016
I feel really bad for those characters being discriminated against...good job showing the social climate of the times, different from today...Keep writing.
| Al7249 chapter 28 . 7/22/2016
Wow that was pretty intense and I'm kinda wondering is Jo going to be in this?
| jopolniaczek chapter 26 . 6/28/2016
1) Dude. I actually have thought that Kim had a bi vibe on the show. I haven't seen a LOT of Diff'rent Strokes but I've seen enough episodes with her and female friends to come to this conclusion. So that part made me a little excited. lol 2) It's been so long since the last update that I forgot Nancy is one of your "villains" and it's bumming me out all over again. 3) Verrrry unsettled by the implication that Blair may like Sue Ann or Cindy. What a disaster that would be. 4) Just like old times, your update makes me want to update!
| BuffyTheSlayr chapter 26 . 6/22/2016
Yea! You are still writing! Good work!
| Alexa chapter 25 . 10/11/2014
I love this story. Sue Ann and Cindy are my favorite FOL characters. Thanks for writing this story.
| anon chapter 25 . 8/6/2013
oh wow this story is amazing! i was so into it and lost track of time. i hope you write more soon!
| ilovexmas chapter 25 . 7/21/2013
Wow that was intense and i'll be looking forward to some more whenever you're ready!
PS: your story of 1982 with CINANN sounds good but will the other girls also be on it will JO ever make an appearance?
well done anyway and i want to say that i really enjoyed reading your 'season 1 FOL' since this is all when it all started and i feel there isn't enough stories with the 'forgotten FOL girls'...
| Hallwings chapter 22 . 7/5/2013
Question-Is "Margo" the character from "The New Girl, Part II"? Also...is Blair talking about Kimberly Drummond?
| katyperry16 chapter 25 . 7/4/2013
Perfect! Simply perfect!
| jopolniaczek chapter 25 . 7/4/2013
Great chapter. Their relationship took long enough to come to a head but it was worth it.
If you do write something for Little Darlings, I'm already excited. I love that movie.