Reviews for naruto a different story
roshlimon chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
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tseug chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
You may want to revise your capitalization and punctuation. I pretty sure you aren't a native English speaker, so maybe you should get a beta-reader.

The concept for your story is a good one; but your summary may turn some people off.

Happy writing,

San Ying
MelancholyMadness chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Oooh this sounds good! I like how it isn't a NaruTen pairing. I'm actually more of a NejiTen kind of girl. As for pairings for Naruto, maybe Hinata? I like the way you've gone with the plot so far.

As for who the mystery man is, my wild guess is Madara. I have no clue. I hope you drop hints in chapter two.

My one issue is that your grammar and spelling could use some work. The structure is fine, but there are somethings that could easily be fixed that should be. If you ever want someone to look it over and fix it up, I volunteer. PM me if you do.

-Ash