Reviews for If You Go Down to the Woods
Guest chapter 31 . 8/17/2015
great
Guest chapter 53 . 11/19/2013
I've just reviewed your other 'Emmerdale' fic 'Run' , but still I'm going to do this one a swell.

Throughly loved reading this story and the epilogue was a great ending.

The chapters were great and though this fic had a lot of writing I did not get confused while trying to follow the writing.

Like your other writing this was well written and had loads of detail and emotion. A bit sad at times but the ending really concluded the fic fantastically.

Hope you find time too maybe write another Emmerdale fanficion and even better if it involves Chas.

Thank you once more for writing, look forward to any future fics from you! :)
CBurns1995 chapter 53 . 7/29/2013
i really loved this fanfic :) even though it had so much sadness in it was written extremely well and i really enjoyed reading it :) i also loved the epilogue with Belle getting the best birthday and Chas being pregnant :)
Guest chapter 53 . 10/21/2012
Great story really enjoyed. Get those POVs right and you're onto a winner. Yvonne Richards xx
Guest chapter 11 . 10/19/2012
Really enjoying this. I love the way you have captured everyones voices. Written loads of XFiles fanfic myself plus 2 novels and run self publishing coy and edited a number of books. Didn't tell you that to brag just to validate my review for you. Don't forget though you should only write from one characters POV (point of view), so you can't have both Chas and Carl thinking about a situation. You have to tell us what one is thinking but you can only show us how the other one is feeling. So when Chas is recounting Aarons childhood it can't be in the same chapter as Aarons POV on the story too. Hope that helps. Keep up the good work. About 20% of the way through now. Yvonne Richards
Nichola chapter 53 . 10/3/2012
I really enjoyed reading this story, it was a shame Esther died but real life is like that sometimes. This story was very well written. I had been toying with the idea, after reading a couple of other fanfics on this site, of perhaps having a go a writing a fanfic myself but I don't know if I could write one as good as this. I've not had a go at creative writing since i left school.

I hope you do write another one day because i have sincerely enjoyed reading this one.
Nichola chapter 29 . 9/30/2012
So sad and poignant very well written
Nichola chapter 24 . 9/28/2012
I finished this chapter with tears in my eyes
Nichola chapter 23 . 9/28/2012
Don't know why you think you were rambling in this chapter you weren't it has just the right content and momentum
Nichola chapter 12 . 9/27/2012
I had a feeling she'd turn out to be pregnant. I'm thinking its carl's at this point.
Boo112 chapter 53 . 8/31/2012
Awww I don't know how you managed to work Carl & Chas back together but I'm glad that you did! (: Awesome fic! Well Done!
MakeramParge Williams Dingle chapter 53 . 8/30/2012
beautyful love the happy ending xxxxxxxxxxxx
watson's 6 wives chapter 53 . 8/29/2012
can you write a story about cain's judgement day i'd love
to read a story about that
watson's 6 wives chapter 53 . 8/29/2012
wasn't expecting that i thought she'd tell the police
sarah1913 chapter 53 . 8/28/2012
Have really enjoyed this story from the start (can't believe that was nearly a year ago, how time flies!). Nice to get a happy ending too x
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