Reviews for Nightmare
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
That was well written and very interesting to read. Nice job. ;)
dlarg chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
I think the story went by a bit quicker than I hoped for. Like it was just event after event. I could use some more description to be honest. But I actually enjoyed reading it. Even if the events were quicker than normal, it still made me want to read more and more. I think you are a good writer, but still you need to work on your description. Good story! Thanks