|Reviews for Dreaming of Sunshine|
| SpiralAK chapter 28 . 11h ago
"Naruto's... Transformation jutsu changed their shape instead of just projecting an image overtop the real thing." This one confuses me. It actually ties in with the fanon idea that Naruto's Sexy Jutsu makes him into a real girl and it's because of the Nine-Tails or whatever... except Konohamaru uses the same technique, so that explanation is flawed. Also, I figured that anyone could transform into a weapon or something, it's just that Naruto is the only one who actually did it and it can't be because he sucks so bad his failure warps reality or something.
Just some food for thought.
| the.stories.live.on chapter 71 . 20h ago
I just have to say, I freaking love this story. I love the main character, her relationships with the other characters, all the development, the freaking Lightsaber, the girls night out, Naruto doing impossible things (really, his overpowered academy techniques really make more sense now) and just, all the things that happen. I love Team Trouble Magnet.
I LOVE IT ALL!
Keep up the fantastic work!
| the.stories.live.on chapter 57 . 21h ago
The lightsaber thing. That was awesome. It really is ingrained in us that it is the coolest weapon. That was genius to include. Great job.
| the.stories.live.on chapter 37 . 3/8
Okay, I have to tell you, I love Shikaku. I'm glad I was able to overcome the OC prejudice to read this story, because it is awesome. And I love the Shakespeare. Now I have to go on and read the rest.:D
| jacaranda blooms chapter 71 . 3/7
I have to say, OC-centered Naruto fic isn't really what I expected to spend my time reading, but I'll be damned if I haven't fallen into a black hole of it. And I have to say, honestly, this is by far my favorite of them - possibly my favorite Naruto fic in general.
My main problem with fanfiction where an OC replaces Sakura in Team 7 is that it just feels like the author is retelling the story exactly as it happened in canon, except the name 'Sakura' is changed. But I was incredibly pleased that never happened here - I never had that weird character bleed where I was confused if I was reading about Sakura or an OC, you know? Shikako has a really great voice - I like how you take some liberties with canon and play around with things, how she interacts with characters that people don't often interact with in fic (Chouji, Ino, Jiraiya, etc.)
I also really like her relationship with Shikamaru. They clearly care a great deal for each other, but it's never sappy or out of character on Shikamaru's part.
Also, "We were stars." I maybe teared up a little bit.
No pressure - but I look forward to whenever you update this again :)
| Barriers chapter 66 . 3/6
Hmm a flat wall barrier might work ok-ish, but the harder and more rigid it is the more brittle it gets. Being a wall, it would easily shatter when pushed even a little bit past acceptable deviations (easier to break a dry rubber band than a stretchy one). An amorphous solid using constantly moving air currents maybe? Perhaps a rotating semi-spherical barrier (spheres having larger surface areas for force to dissipate across) similar to kaiten? I'm just having some fun brainstorming, great work so far! Update soon!
| BladeofRays chapter 71 . 3/6
Really great story, glad I sound his.
| Lette1685 chapter 71 . 3/5
Thought this was going to be just another lame naruto story. But it's not. And I love it...
| Guest chapter 71 . 3/3
This chapter was amazing. A perfect climax to this part of your story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Chocogirl24 chapter 71 . 3/3
Awesome chapter! Hope you can update soon (:
| csibpip chapter 71 . 3/2
I would like you to know that i consider this story the best naruto fanfiction i've read, one of the best of all fanfictions, and definitely the most well-made.
| Palice chapter 41 . 3/1
You need better curses? Well when the shit hits the fan for me its either Voldemort's nipple's or jesus cock sucking christ
| Guest chapter 71 . 3/1
"We were stars" - damn if that didn't make me cry.
| Asha chapter 71 . 2/27
Yay an update! Love your story, best self insert ever!
| jeannette.rothenberger chapter 71 . 2/26
ohhhhhhhh, next chapter please.