Reviews for Awake and Alive
madz chapter 29 . 10/12/2013
haha cute, :)
Remedy's Melody chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
o ...my... god... that... many ...chapters!
badboylover24 chapter 15 . 4/19/2013
Sorry about the last review. Anyway, I wish to apologize about my fanfic I Belong to Him. You stated in your fanfic that you felt bad about leaving out the sex scene for this chapter. I just thought that perhaps I'd make you feel better by writing it for you, disclaimers included. I didn't know I needed permission; the first-time scene was just in my head. I'm also sorry the other reviewers weren't sure who I was talking about. Again, I'm really sorry. I just thought I would help out.
badboylover24 chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
Willzyx chapter 29 . 3/6/2013
Very Awesome! I loved reading this story of yours :)
Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 30 . 10/26/2012
Great story...I enjoyed reading it!
ShadowCat98 chapter 30 . 9/14/2012
Well done, one of the best Jakea/OC stories I've read. I hope you will do some of your ideas soon, they sound interesting and entertaining:3

XD

Shadow
LuluCalliope chapter 30 . 9/13/2012
I loved this story. There are no words that can describe how much I loved it, and I am very interested in a possible sequel.

Some of my favorite things about this story included: how much Jake was in character, his unique love interest, and the new, entertaining characters. It was well-written, descriptive, and thought-provoking. I've added this to my favorite stories list.
LuluCalliope chapter 20 . 9/12/2012
Daran Norris? Any relation to Chuck? Ha, ha, ha...
LuluCalliope chapter 17 . 9/12/2012
Oh...Wyatt and Jake know each other?

*begin Troll 2 impression* Oh my Gooooooooddddd!

Okay...I probably should have seen that one coming...

Oh, Jake was a ladies' man? ;) I KNEW IT!
ShadowCat98 chapter 8 . 9/11/2012
This situation reminds me of the Guardians of Ga' Hoole and some of the names from the Elder Scrolls games...Entertaining, anyway so far:)
LuluCalliope chapter 15 . 9/11/2012
Oh, Jake is getting kind of possessive, isn't he? I'm attracted to him and intimidated by him at the same time...just like the movie...
LuluCalliope chapter 14 . 9/11/2012
Aw...true love is so...romantic!

(I give myself the award for the sappiest line ever written in a review.)

The chemistry between the snakes is really good!
LuluCalliope chapter 13 . 9/11/2012
Rango and Jake are acting like an old married couple. KNOCK IT OFF, RANGO! You already have one!

By the way...did Jake quote True Grit at the beginning of this chapter?
LuluCalliope chapter 11 . 9/11/2012
"Shut yer bread wallet!" The award for the most unique insult goes to..."shut yer bread wallet!"

(Second place goes to, "Shut your bong-hole, hippie!" from Futurama.)

Jake really DOES care! *sighs dreamily*
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