Reviews for Barren |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was beautiful and sad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this version of bellas future as a vampire, without renesme. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poignant. . . |
![]() ![]() for those who cannot sleep should not dare to dream...what a beautiful line |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really awesome story. Cryed so much! This is going to be one of the FanFictions i always remember. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great little fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad :( but a good story 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! You said so much with so few words. That was really a beautiful story. Thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is sweet and, while sad, not totally so. I love that they were part of Ella's life for a while and that they helped Renée. Typical Edward to beat himself up for what he can't do, rather than feeling happy about what he can. Bless him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's not often that a story gives me chills but this one does, in such a good way. It's heartbreaking, certainly, but hopeful as well since Bella and Edward's love is still intact. So many stories in this vein have resentment as a theme but Bella's longing is more like that of a human woman who is barren-this is just the way it is and she will try to deal. You are an artist with your writing-conveying so much with relatively few words. Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sad, sweet, tender - way to learn the consequences of her choice. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What Edward most feared, come to pass. Very sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad but loved your writing and your take of vampire reality |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reading this sad little tale makes me glad SM created Renesmee, so Bella and Edward could be parents. Your story is probably more realistic concerning vampires, but still a bit difficult to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good story, realistic portrayal of what could've happened if Bella didn't get pregnant. Beautiful and well-written. My heart aches. |