Reviews for Barren
M.S.Carol chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
that was beautiful and sad
ImYours1901 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Really enjoyed this version of bellas future as a vampire, without renesme.
lesuse chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Poignant. . .
niks chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
for those who cannot sleep should not dare to dream...what a beautiful line
Alice Song chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Really awesome story. Cryed so much! This is going to be one of the FanFictions i always remember.
harleys chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
great little fic!
greenleaves12 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Sad :( but a good story 3
avidreaderone chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Wow! You said so much with so few words. That was really a beautiful story.
Thanks for writing it.
withany chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
This is sweet and, while sad, not totally so. I love that they were part of Ella's life for a while and that they helped Renée. Typical Edward to beat himself up for what he can't do, rather than feeling happy about what he can. Bless him.
Eeyorefan12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
It's not often that a story gives me chills but this one does, in such a good way. It's heartbreaking, certainly, but hopeful as well since Bella and Edward's love is still intact. So many stories in this vein have resentment as a theme but Bella's longing is more like that of a human woman who is barren-this is just the way it is and she will try to deal. You are an artist with your writing-conveying so much with relatively few words. Loved this!
abbyweyr chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
sad, sweet, tender - way to learn the consequences of her choice. Thanks for sharing.
Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
What Edward most feared, come to pass. Very sad.
Dil9 chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Sad but loved your writing and your take of vampire reality
k1942 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Reading this sad little tale makes me glad SM created Renesmee, so Bella and Edward could be parents. Your story is probably more realistic concerning vampires, but still a bit difficult to read.
yanxxx chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is such a good story, realistic portrayal of what could've happened if Bella didn't get pregnant.

Beautiful and well-written.

My heart aches.
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