|Reviews for The End of Summer|
| melsbells91 chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
AH! Loved it! That was so good, loved every minute of it. Super cute!
| pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Haha, I like the idea of Team Gai doing things the hard way and Gai being a directionless oaf. Nice job. Also, another way you can tell that a watermelon is good is if you knock on it and it turns out hollow. You'd want a hallow sound. ;)
| Levi Ackerman chapter 4 . 11/29/2011
Great story! I especially loved the ending - the smile and Neji's confession. It was really sweet. Plus the kiss :) always a winner, kiss-endings
| Fanwoman chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
Nice transition from the last chapter and also very pretty.
I like the comparison to the moon, so appropriate for a Hyuga.
Aw! Sweet KibaHinaness!
I found her figuring out what Neji had figured out by her reaction to be surprisingly adorable in its A B C, which means C D OMG ness.
YES! Understanding is just as important!
And such a cute ending!
:squees at the sweetness:
Doesn't it stink when RL comes in and squishes writing time? Then again, I find having to work and not having the chance to write often concentrates my thoughts about what I want to write and how to say it.
I hope things went/go well with your studying and that you have happy holidays.
| Conejo-sama chapter 2 . 11/12/2011
Poor Neji! I thought he was smarter than that! ;)
| Kyanie chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
hihihi. funny ;D
| Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
| Fanwoman chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Your intro paragraphs made me chuckle. "If it was easy, then they weren't doing it right." Indeed.
Since I don't have byakugan, the yellow spot on the bottom is what I use to determine the ripeness of my watermelons; the spot will be whitish green if it's under ripe. :D
Muddy ground? You don't want to harvest a watermelon after a hard rain; it diminishes their sweetness. XD
Too funny! I like how you let us figure out what's on the sign. But I'm not clear on this. Will all four chapters appear here, or not? Maybe you should say.
| Dreaming101 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Lol! This is adorable! can't wait to see more! :)