Reviews for Jealousy
maria100 chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
Another great story! Poor Shep just can't get lucky. Maybe Carson should just chain him to a bed in the infirmary, to keep him safe!
SlippedHalo8186 chapter 3 . 1/10/2012
Brilliant story i Loved the right amount of Shep whump - I loves me a bit of that. Mmmm let me see, pain in the arse obsessed husband or LC John Sheppard-that's so easy women what was wrong with ya husband round the back of the head with ya fryin pan and rescue Sheppard already.
shirik chapter 3 . 10/7/2011
tnx for a great h/c ff!
shirik chapter 2 . 10/7/2011
wow great suffering scenes!
shirik chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
loved the start! love hurt shepperd!
albaM chapter 3 . 9/30/2011
Ronan and a puppy in one story- what more could anyone want?

up to your usual high standard, look foward to the next.
JoeyLuv chapter 3 . 9/17/2011
Finally got back to this story. Great Shepwhump and the cutest dog's name ever...Funkle! Realy enjoyed this one.
wisconsinrocks chapter 3 . 9/15/2011
Enjoyed your story. Thanks for continuing to write.
flyboyfan23 chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
Absolutely loved it! Great Whump. Great Team Interactions and the name (Funkle?) Had me laughing. :)

Thatnks for an awesome birthday present!
shepsgirl72 chapter 3 . 9/8/2011
Sorry to be late to the party with this review. RL gets in the way yet again!

So you've put Shepppard on the road to recovery again, with long old haul ahead of him. And you know how much he hates those slow recoveries, you cruel authress! Thanks for the story. :)

*Ponders changing new dog's name to Funkle.* Nah...maybe not!
SyfyFan chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
Well done again. Great story and nice whump. Looking forward to more.
Astrollama chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
Now THAT was some fine whumpage! Great job.
hotshow chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
I thought this story was very good. Thank you.
Jedi40 chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
Another great Shep whump fic.

Poor John getting beat by some psycho over a woman who has the hots for him.

Nice voicing job on everyone in the story.

Like the way you added the puppy into it at the end.

John no matter how stir crazy you get listen to what Carson says!...yeah right.

Can't wait for your next whump Shep fic .
BMick chapter 3 . 9/6/2011
Your writing gets continually more of a pleasure to read, tighter and with more of a flow. You've always had great ideas - though John might not agree, if he had a voice in it!

From the fact that Funkle ended up out at the farm, it seems Jaulan used the puppy to get John outside... a dog-napper as well as Sheppard-napper.

Enjoyed Beckett and Lorne's discussion of John's mission report difficulties to come.
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