Reviews for Loki
Machaon's Apprentice chapter 18 . 12/7/2015
What a brilliant story !
sopmire chapter 19 . 11/6/2015
Wow, great writing in this story, looking forward to reading the next!
Cat at Dusk chapter 19 . 10/28/2015
Great story!
Caricature of a Witch chapter 19 . 4/5/2015
Wow. I so loved reading this story. You managed to keep up a lot of parallels with the original without making it sound forced in any way, that alone is pretty awesome in my book, and around those parallels you twisted a different and really cool story and I'm not really into Loki x Jane, but I still think I will go check out your sequel. ...which I see isn't finished. Oh shit. I haven't even started reading it, but... I'm already asking you to continue nonetheless. Yeah?
I like many things chapter 1 . 3/7/2015
I've read stories that loki is out character, or asgard is a asshole(hole full of asses), or that everything is confusing and boring, but not once in my fanfiction life, I have seen a story that is a concoction of three. Well done, my friend.
I like many things chapter 19 . 3/7/2015
What the hell? So basically, assgard (two 's's)hates loki and ignore, bully, looks down on him for his entire childhood and life for no good reason. And when he accidentally kills baldr(good riddance, that little piece of shit), they don't even listen to him and torture him for six whole months by fucking snake venom in a fucking underground cave(which normal assgardians wouldn't have survived). And think HE'S the one who's a monster? Wow. How did you beared writing this?
dristi5683 chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
I really enjoyed your story! At first I wasn't going to read it because of another review but I'm glad I did. It kept me interested the entire time, had accurate character portrayal, and natural progression of their relationship. I loved the epilogue too. It goes to show, you can't please everyone and to each their own, so don't take negative reviews personal. I really want to read the second one but I see you haven't updated in a year so I'll put it on alert. If you start updating again I'll read the whole thing. Thanks for taking time out of your life to write and to share with us crazed lokane fans who can't get enough!
thelittlepandagirl chapter 18 . 8/10/2014
This was a good read! Looking forward to the sequel.
Hekka chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
Well, if I correctly remember the movie, Odin turned Thor into a mortal, as part of the punishment. And cause in your story is Loki was banished (and method was the same), it is logical to assume that he is also mortal. So I don't understand his confusion about his injuries and his true origins. He is supposed to be the smart one. Had already understand it.
Devon Goes to Heaven chapter 18 . 7/30/2014
I just wanted to say that this has to be one of the few fanfics I can go back and enjoy over and over. Jane is just so perfect in this, and there's something in this fanfiction with the Jane and Loki romance that the Thor movie lacked with its romance subplot.
FIRE ELF MAIDEN chapter 18 . 7/28/2014
I really enjoyed reading this FanFic. I am looking forward to reading the sequel. great job.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 14 . 6/25/2014
Lost interest...

Entirely foolish...

Cumbersome and 3/4 of the fanfic was boring...

So indeed I had to skip through all the boring rubbish, to the few points of interest...

So overall a very bad read...
Lord Asmodeus chapter 7 . 6/25/2014

Good start...

The flashbacks - anecdotes - have begun to be repetitious in nature and have increasingly become utterly boring.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 2 . 6/25/2014

She should die...

Never liked her, so vile and so disgustingly American...
review0987 chapter 18 . 4/30/2014
Okay. It was good at first, the flasbacks are amazing, but it got a little... muddled? Sometimes I get lost in the story, meaning I don't seem to understand what's going on, but the plot just made me so hook.

It's the latter part of the story that was a bit, ehh. Nice story though, but it lacks something I guess.
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