Reviews for But It's Better If You Do
Alice chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
OMG! All through reading this I couldn't help thinking how you got both of their voices exactly right, especially Gary, it was perfect :D
Gloxinia chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
I'm so glad you brought up John's relationship with Rachel. He just kinda came up from no where and to say I was unhappy to have him introduced is an understatement. It could be just because I don't want him and Rachel to be together, but I really don't like him. He's just there for Rachel to have a boyfriend. Anyway, I thought this was a great chapter. Gary was in character and even though it was not as fluffy as previous chapters I think Gary was still sweet in his own way. Caring for Rachel like that. Aww, I really can't help but ship them. Great story and I'm definitely looking forward to the new updates that will hopefully come XD
Renn chapter 9 . 4/25/2013
John was totally random in my opnion too! Congtrats on writing this, you really nailed Gary and these are so funny! :)
Hannah chapter 9 . 4/7/2013
Next chapter? :( its been awhile
V5Precise-Red chapter 9 . 2/21/2013
you need to post the next chapter!
V5Precise-Red chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
uhhhh yeah you need to update this NOW
kali82 chapter 9 . 1/3/2013
Don't apologize for the lack of shippy, I thought Gary was plenty sweet - in his own way!
And I totally agree with you that John is kinda just *there* like 'let's give Rachel a guy' there. He doesn't appear to do anything else for the show. Thanks for having Gary point that out :-)
Automail-gHost chapter 9 . 12/31/2012
*whistles*

This is great! You capture Gary perfectly! He is my favorite charicter and you protray him just right! I cannot WAIT for your next update! Hurry and write more soon, OK? C:
Colorful-Pop chapter 9 . 12/27/2012
(sorry i didn't quite feel like logging in) When I first understood that they put John in the show just to give Rachel a little romance I felt the same way! Like, NO! Go home John! This show only has space for Rachel and Gary love, not Rachel random blonde dude relationships!
The-Motto-Nikki chapter 8 . 9/21/2012
This is good. Make more.
Sophia Lawliet chapter 8 . 8/27/2012
This story is fantastic- you portray Gary's autism very realistically, and I enjoy the progression of their "relationship" so far. And, as with the show, Gary and Rachel are absolutely adorable together. I appreciate you incorporating her family and the other characters, because that really gives a nice backdrop for Gary and Rachel to interact against. You also have some great dialogue. I think my favorite line was Hicks in Shotgun Wedding, "I'll juggle chairs. With people sitting on them." So in character, and so amusing.

Please update soon! I'd love to see maybe Gary and Rachel talking about Anna, or perhaps Nina trying to give Gary advice, or even Rachel and Doctor Rosen talking about the pseudo relationship and how far it's come. Anything, really. You're a brilliant writer and I look forward to seeing more!
Your Worshipfulness chapter 8 . 8/27/2012
After 8 chapters of teasing, I definitely think the next chapter should have some real progress in it. How about a real kiss-maybe under the context of another fake date. Or perhaps Gary could discover pornography and ask Rachel about it? I'm trying to think of realistic scenarios in which Gary and romance/sex would actually be believable and it's very challenging. Still, worth it, as you write them as a very cute couple. Update soon!

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kali82 chapter 8 . 8/20/2012
Oh hurray! I'm so glad to find Gary & Rachel fic! You're so right, there isn't enough of it.
You write great Gary - really great, I can hear the words in his voice. And Rachel is so sweet, her growing awareness of him. I hope inspiration strikes you again soon!
Islandwitch chapter 8 . 8/14/2012
Ohhh, I HATE that song! It's just tooo perky! On the other hand, I haven't laughed this hard in a reeeaaaallllly long time :) Great story, I love Rachel and Gary.
zoraya h chapter 8 . 7/27/2012
looove it!

can the next chapter be a bit more romantic? maybe a "save me from this creeper"-type situation?

ahahahaahah anything will make me happy!

happy writing!
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