|Reviews for 4 Privet Drive|
| jayrambles chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Aww... so sweet and sad...
| raemanzu and spica tea chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Hmmm this is very interesting. I think you explore Harry's thoughts and feelings about this very accurately. My only note would be that there are a lot of sentences where a few more commas would be a good idea, but other than that it is well written.