|Reviews for Second Chances|
| LordxSesshomaru chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Chapter 1... Friday the 13th ftw! My favorite horror series...
It would have been hellraiser.. the first 2 hellraisers were amazing.. then the rest became mind benders and it just destroyed them for me lol
| Negitve chapter 9 . 3/30/2012
Neverthrive I love you XD really your story is awesome and it has me close to tears with happyness _ thank you for the good read.
| domdom chapter 9 . 2/28/2012
there was 3 famous clauses in there and you didn't point them out and had finn say the 3 one at the end also got better than 1st story
| domdom chapter 7 . 2/28/2012
didn't see that comin
| domdom chapter 2 . 2/28/2012
| MusicLover78 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
| AnAddictedReader chapter 8 . 10/24/2011
LOLOLOL! Either write a sequel or an omake for the wedding. If you're going to do the omake, don't forget to include Marecline's father rofl. I totally want to see how you will make him react to the information that Marceline is getting married.
| AnAddictedReader chapter 3 . 10/24/2011
Lol, so I was in chapter 5 and I finally remembered what I was going to put in this review for chapter 3 lmao. You totally made Finn and Jake sound like totally wanna-be gangsters.
| AnAddictedReader chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Hahah, totally saw that coming lol.
| Sringer0 chapter 9 . 9/28/2011
You, my friend, have created a master piece.
| Sringer0 chapter 3 . 9/28/2011
Take something away...?
Oh... I see. :P
| Sringer0 chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
Whoo... There's 9 chapters (Probably gonna upload more right?) I've got some reading to be done.
| Sringer0 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Wow, you should have told me you uploaded your story. I was wondering about it for some time but the idea about checking to see if you had just never popped into my mind.
Anyway, I'm happy to see that your working on it.
| He23t chapter 9 . 9/20/2011
Hey great job finishing this story, that was Awesome
Can't for your next one.
| Swordust chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
I've read your previous story and just started this one. I've been liking them so far. Spelling is probably only problem I have with your chapters. Stuff like 'of coarse' instead of 'of course', 'finnaly' instead of 'finally', or like this chapter: 'mamazelle' instead of 'mademoiselle'.
I can deal with the spelling, but it does interrupt the story's flow a bit; for me at least. You should probably get a beta reader to check your spelling and grammar, or just use google. Other than that, I've been rather pleased with your work.