Reviews for What If?
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Please keep writeing.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
You are gonna wright more, right?
bunnyboo chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
okay then...L.A. would never do that(join them).EVER.
MidnightRose1027 chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I WISHED that happened in the series.
I LOVE this pairing and L.A in general. He just wants Ellis to love him ;3; great job writing it! It was adorable and I love how innocent Ellis is xD so cute she is perfectly in character! *claps*
Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Interesting... I'd love to see what happens next. (Hehehe...for some reason, I just love this pairing - even if L.A. is a creepy freakish stalker. XD)

This was cool, thanks for writing it! The only thing that was a bit confusing was that Nadie knew LA was anther witch...did he tell her? And Ellis? You should add that bit in.

And...haha, you kept LA (and Ellis) in character very well.

"I like Nadie. Should I kiss her?" L.A. snarled at the thought of her and Nadie together, and his expression became one of anger and hatred.

Brilliant.
Hetalianluvr chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Wow. Really good. People need to write more for this pairing.
HappyFireNekoNeko chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
A well written story that embraces the character's real personalites! Great job! Slightly sexy-ish, but its good that L.A didn't go further with Ellis ;).