|Reviews for Vices|
| baby92sam chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
omg u need 2 keep going!
| chris smith chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
it was a great story :D
| sophiainterrupted chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
It's good :) just the lyrics at the top. can you shorten it next time, maybe just quote it at the top? That would be great. Also, add how Eli felt when he asked Clare for help, given their history. Describe their appearances now. Is Eli's hair shorter? Does Clare still have that look that only Eli can see?
It's pretty good :) hope to see more
| brian chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
nice story. lol u always make me rreview ur storys but they r always good
| Voicesandvirtues chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I love it so far, I can't wait to find out what happens next!