|Reviews for Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way vs Canon|
| ShaiGar chapter 13 . 5/19
Kinda surprised Draco didn't just go for Crucio.
| Storygirl000 chapter 5 . 2/16
What is it with boys and catfights anyways?
| Storygirl000 chapter 3 . 2/16
There's this wonderful Muggle website called "Amazon", Luna. If you're looking for a straightjacket and cattle prod, you might find one there.
Also, XD XD XD XD XD
| Edelweiss1994 chapter 16 . 4/23/2016
Note: This is intended to be a brief review of the entire story.
I waited for too long to finally read this, but in the end I am glad that I finally did. I actually discovered this story's existence via its TV Tropes page before deciding to read it for myself.
As for the actual content, I really enjoyed the first half of the story. A.K.A. the part where they were all still at Hogwarts. I did not consider the second half to be bad, I just found it to be less enjoyable than the first half. To add more to why I preferred the first half, I guess some deeper exploration of the story's version of Tara and her friend Jenny would have been nice. Such as how the idea to "troll" the rest of the world with My Immortal had come up. And why the story had not been updated for so long. I will also say that the concept of new Mary Sues always replacing old ones is both fascinating and terrifying. I have not read or watched Harry Potter in a while, but I got the feeling that this story imitated canon pretty effectively where it mattered. I found the ability of Tara to steal the narration to be really strange, it was funny though how the author described herself in a Mary Sue-esque way later on. It would have been great to see the protagonists be able to kill Ebony and Willow without having to leave their world, but I do not plan to lose sleep over that. To conclude, this was good story, not perfect, but worthy of a Favorite. A quick and mostly easy read and a solid parody on an iconic piece of badfic.
Closing Note: I, for now, do not intend to read the sequels. Frankly, this is because I find canon characters trying to fight a Mary Sue off to be more entertaining a concept than original characters created for that specific purpose doing that same thing.
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 8/6/2015
The last part was just sick...
Draco is far from being my favorite character, but still...
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24/2015
Ebony Raven Way could have almost been a name you could see a person have, even if it's somewhat unusual. Or maybe just Raven, there's a girl at my school named Raven. She's nice.
| Lionasha No Bruja chapter 5 . 6/1/2015
YES! Best passive French ever!
This is making me giggle so hard I'm in danger of spelling worse than Enoby! o my satin!
| Wombatman99 chapter 14 . 5/4/2015
| Wombatman99 chapter 6 . 5/4/2015
Room of Requirement Ex Machina?
| Wombatman99 chapter 3 . 5/4/2015
Must. Restrain. Laughter.
| Wombatman99 chapter 2 . 5/4/2015
Well, this seems...pleasent, for lack of a better word. But really, you hit the nail on the head with a sledgehammer on the bitches personality, or more, lack thereof.
| passanger chapter 16 . 3/15/2015
| 68654578 chapter 14 . 2/8/2015
i don't know whats going on
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Ohhhh nooooo, its EBODY!
| ReynardKeisuna chapter 14 . 6/21/2014
This is... Exactly what I'd have expected My Immortal to end.
Hilarious, but... ...I believe my I.Q. Droped a goodz 045 pontz.