Reviews for Mondays
Kelsey441 chapter 12 . 5/24/2016
If Hermione is just feeling butterflies, then H and G shouldn't be able to feel from the outside.
Kelsey441 chapter 7 . 5/24/2016
You've got some great ideas here, but I'd love to see an edited version. Slow down the narrative.
Kelsey441 chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
There's something here that makes me want to read. I'm struggling with the run-on sentences and comma splices, though. I think there's potential here, though.
Guest chapter 22 . 11/18/2015
(Chortling with glee...) And the weasel gets what's coming to him...nicely done theo, couldn't have done any better myself!
Guest chapter 19 . 11/18/2015
(Sneer) The weasel's has always been deranged, nothing new there...
Addicted2ItAll chapter 31 . 10/21/2015
What happened to Blaise and Cassie?
faceinthecrowdofgreatspace chapter 33 . 8/23/2015
Great! I want to translate it for Russian fans of Dramione, if you don't mind. May I do it?
Guest chapter 7 . 6/13/2015
I think Ron is giving the threats
Courtney chapter 30 . 8/25/2014
Also why does Hermione cry so much? You made her be a ditzy whiner.
Courtney chapter 27 . 8/25/2014
I'm sorry, it's a good plot but it goes around and over certain things over and over again. Also, I find myself correcting grammar and punctuation in my head.
HermioneMalfoy55 chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
This story was incredible! Perfect amounts of romance, humor and drama. I live they way you write all of these characters! The plot is amazing and executed perfectly! If you write a sequel I will absolutely be reading it! Simply amazing! Really great work!
condizzle19 chapter 35 . 9/13/2013
Love this story. I couldn't stop reading it. :)
MissUnderstoodByLIGHT8907 chapter 35 . 9/5/2013
This was a really amazing story...
Mila Pink chapter 33 . 8/25/2013
I fell in love with history.
Love each character and depth.
All are fantastic.
Katie chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
Great start!
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